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I See....I Hear
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I See....I Hear |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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I See...I Hear I see night loveless loneliness unforgiven unloved words see I I hear clearly painfully paralysed retreating reacting crying hear I Karen Torbiak© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
 This is so sad!Kathleen (Kay) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Karen, I can feel such sorrow behind your words, I pray everything is OK with you! If you need someone to talk to, I am always here for you! (sad sigh) We all love you, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Absolutely outstanding work, Karen I love the way you shaped the poem so that it twists around.... Beautiful!   copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
I have seen...I have heard, but I have also prayed that all is well or that all will be well. Lovely poetry.  I am many. [This message has been edited by Siofra (edited 12-09-2001).] |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Karen, This is soooo sad  Very well done.. I loveeeee the format! But so sad.Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Karen, this is so sad. But, beautiful work. I love the way you did this. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, Karen, you know just how it feels. Well done form, too. Sandra |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime, Liked the form, liked the poem. *L* |
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