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Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

0 posted 2001-12-09 10:35 PM

I love the dove, she flies above
My life of strife,
Behold the knife, my faithless wife!
The moon in June, I croon the tune,
And spoon the prunes into buffoons.
My heart is torn by awkward thorn,
So filled with scorn, the sheep is shorn.
My nose, she knows the rose,
Suppose we pose in pantyhose?
Delightful, dear, insightful, clear-
Filled with surmise but no surprise.
I hoped you would, I knew you could,
Are times still good, back in the hood?
If you nap, you silly sap, you'll take the rap.
Stolen ice, not so nice--throw the dice.
Look for seven, pray for heaven, film at eleven.

Nan

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-12-09 10:48 PM

*giggling* this sure was different. I liked how it kept me smiling. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

2 posted 2001-12-09 10:53 PM

Ah! Then my work here is done. I had to make somebody smile before I logged off and went to bed.

Nan

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2001-12-10 05:06 AM

blu, blu,blu,blu. Now that I've got my tongue straightened out again. I can say how fascinating this was.
Write on
Kethry.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2001-12-10 10:27 AM

Hey Keth!
Good to hear from you.

Nan

N orth Carolina Girl
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

5 posted 2001-12-10 10:51 AM

Nan,you have put a smile on my face this Monday morning.

Juanita

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2001-12-10 10:59 AM

Pilgrimage,
A smile, is a smile, is a smile. Enjoyed

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2001-12-10 11:07 AM

(smiles) Sooooooo beautiful! (sigh) Your beautiful clever verse lights these blue pages! I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) We all love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nancy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

8 posted 2001-12-10 11:24 AM

I just love what you did with those words, Nan...It was a real hoot!
A great fun poem to read and as always...so very well written!

Great Job!!!!!

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

9 posted 2001-12-10 11:29 AM

Nan darling girl,

absolutely wonderful, I have a huge smile now.

I don't know how you do it darling girl but you alwasy do this is fabulous

Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

sodpossom
Senior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

10 posted 2001-12-10 12:23 PM

Nan

I'm tongue tied anyway,and you just went ahead and tied it in a knot.It was worth the smile though!

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

11 posted 2001-12-10 12:35 PM

Dear Juanita, Seymour, Noah, Lyra, Marsha, and sp,
Thanks! I was hoping you'd like it. I giggled all the way through writing it, and got this little sparkle in my eye when I thought of sp trying to say it three times fast.

Nan

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