Open Poetry #17 |
There Likely Wasn't Snow---a seasonal piece |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
There Likely Wasn’t Snow Virginia Salter there likely wasn’t snow it was probably in spring when the angels made their show and raised on high their song to sing they lauded the Lord above for the gift He’d given humanity to protect them with His love from sin and deeds of futile vanity He knew right from the start-- then when the moment was just right, He sacrificed with His whole heart, sending Christ into the night the heavens filled with vibrant song in a glorious, profound light as shepherds in their fields were awed by reverent sight even cattle, sheep and ass bowed in holy awe struck joy as they welcomed the true Lamb in that tiny baby boy a star stood still above His bed glowing promises supreme the baby swaddled toe to head as our God fulfilled the dream from that day, and on and on, freedom for life eternally was given to each one who would call Him Lord and King cattle lowed, and donkeys brayed while the Spirit from on high sent angels chorusing their praise for in Him all sin would die now in the winter of our lives we have the promises of spring eternally we will survive when we receive our God and King ©December 9, 2001 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! YES, MAY HIS LOVE SHINE FOREVER AND GUIDE US ALL, AS HIS LOVE WILL GO ON FOREVER!!! (smiles) BRAVO!!! Your words are always filled with love, God Bless You!!! We all love you, sweet Virginia! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Wonderful poem!! I have tried to put thoughts and feelings for this in a poem and can never get it right. You did it in such a lovely way. Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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True Reflections Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 143Ohio, USA |
Virginia, Very well done. It's a story I never tire of hearing. You described it with the dignity and honor it deserves. Roger |
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