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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-12-09 04:10 PM


My heart has been closed
and in need of major repairs
since you walked out on me
without ever looking back

Did you not want to see the hurt
in my eyes or did you not
want to hear my cries
as I pleaded with you to stay?

Nothing was going to keep you here
You had already made up your mind
but I don't think you could foresee
how damaging your departure would be

My feelings had become unimportant to you
I became excess baggage
totally superfluous
no longer required

I felt like a crumb that had been
absently flicked onto the floor
only to be trampled on
and then swept away

My emotional scars will heal in time
but I remain detemined to
become a stronger person
as I refuse to let love defeat me

So much love I have to give
but so carefully I will choose
as to where I plant my seeds of love
in order to reap the rewards
and receive the love I believe I deserve

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-09 04:14 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, I cried reading this, my heart cries out to see yourself as excess baggage of love, for you deserve the most beautiful love! (sigh) This is so sad, but I'm also proud to see the hope in your heart that you will share all the love you have to give! (sigh) My heart is with you always, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) We all love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Larry C
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2 posted 2001-12-09 04:26 PM


Sue,
I like the fact you haven't lost sight of your own value. Sorry for the pain but I have faith in your strength.  


The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present!

[This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 12-09-2001).]

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