Open Poetry #17 |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
My heart has been closed and in need of major repairs since you walked out on me without ever looking back Did you not want to see the hurt in my eyes or did you not want to hear my cries as I pleaded with you to stay? Nothing was going to keep you here You had already made up your mind but I don't think you could foresee how damaging your departure would be My feelings had become unimportant to you I became excess baggage totally superfluous no longer required I felt like a crumb that had been absently flicked onto the floor only to be trampled on and then swept away My emotional scars will heal in time but I remain detemined to become a stronger person as I refuse to let love defeat me So much love I have to give but so carefully I will choose as to where I plant my seeds of love in order to reap the rewards and receive the love I believe I deserve Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, I cried reading this, my heart cries out to see yourself as excess baggage of love, for you deserve the most beautiful love! (sigh) This is so sad, but I'm also proud to see the hope in your heart that you will share all the love you have to give! (sigh) My heart is with you always, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) We all love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, I like the fact you haven't lost sight of your own value. Sorry for the pain but I have faith in your strength. The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present! [This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 12-09-2001).] |
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