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My Blue Rose
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My Blue Rose |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite Repost: My Blue Rose My glories on a tender stem This purpose I pursue. A crown of thorns is diadem Its majesty shows blue. It vacillates from whim to whim Its roots no common soil It thinks my adjuration dim And I, a foolish foil I cannot help this love I bare. These minions of reveal I cannot hide this heart of care. Nor can I bare conceal. It has a will of ceaseless tease. It titers at its mark Impossible to make appease The mark is moonless dark. I would it stop this endless broil And set the pot to flame and boil. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 12-09-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wow....what passion lurking in you gentle poet!  LOVED this...(hate the feeling tho, I like to scratch my itches...lol)Good morning, and Happy Sunday to you sy! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, you know what happens to a watched pot! Just turn around for a moment, and the boil will begin... I so Like this side of Sy... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I am glad you reposted this. It's lovely, "diadem" reminds me of a song we sang in grade school. What that has to do with the poem I don't know! But I enjoyed it very much. Kathleen (Kay) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Well me sweet...we can always make raspberry tea when all comes to boil ... I have some blue rose teacups...wont you join me *winkiewinkie* *L* ~~~~~~~~~~ I cannot help this love I bare. These minions of reveal I cannot hide this heart of care. Nor can I bare conceal. It has a will of ceaseless tease. It titers at its mark Impossible to make appease The mark is moonless dark. ========================= one of my faves of yours...I remember well your blue rose of suppose     Its not like you to say sorry, I was waitin on a different story. This time I'm mistaken ... for handing you a heart worth breaking. Nickleback [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 12-09-2001).] |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Maybe someday SY, very nice. They just tease our senses just staying out of reach, don't they?? Bridgette |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, Happy scratching. LOL *L* Sunshine, That's true. *L* Kathleen, Glad you enjoyed again. *L* JM, I'll join you anytime anywhere. Love Sy Bridgette, Yes they do and thank you. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
A little pursuit keeps us at a simmer! This blosssom brew is very fine indeed. So glad you keep bringing these jewels back. Sincerely, Regina |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet Seymour, you always brew such lovely delicate blossoms in your incredible words! (smiles) This poem is a timeless gem, I love it! (big hugggssssss) May this sweet passion last eternally! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very beautiful rhyme and flow!Glad I got a chance to read it. Stevie |
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DarkAngelChelle Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 87Kansas |
Oh, if only we could just stare at the water in the pot and concentrate hard enough ... but unfortunately, getting it to boil that way never seems to work. But sometimes all it takes is time. Or maybe a different pot will suddenly start simmering. Wonderfully written, Seymour. You rock! ~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~ |
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LadySofia Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 238FL., USA |
This poem is awesome! I got a little confused with "diadem" too...were you saying a royal crown is just a crown? The line still read well, however, so I'm not suggesting you change this at all...*claps* bravo! ^_^ LadySofia |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rwood, So glad you make time to read them. *L* Mistletoe, Love your flattery. Sodpossom, Glad you read it and liked it. Chelle, Sometimes, maybe, thank you. Lady Sofia, A crown of thorns is circled. Thank you for the read and nice comment. |
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