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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 Feature Natural border belays with treasures of earth bridge connect two shores Threads of life in harmony nature prints her own feature ~*Theresia~* |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
The simplicity of this is stunning, Charisma, I like! Kathleen (Kay) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
what a beautiful way of describing it!!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma, Good one, enjoyed the read. *L* |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
your words paint extraordinary pictures my dear friend! You are amazing at senryu's and tanka's!  RP |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Charisma, your beautiful visions always build bridges of enchantment! (smiles) This is such a beautiful senryu, I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet Charisma! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Kay: thank you so much for your kind reply, glad that you like it Sea: thank you my dear friend Seymour:Thank you so much for your comment and I am happy that you enjoyed the read RosePetal: thank you for your sweet compliment and so glad that like it too Noah: thank you dear friend, I am glad to know that you like the tanka....thank you for your always kind and lovely replies |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful writing and picture Charisma...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Watching your poetry grow is one of the best Features of Passions... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Charisma, this is beautiful, as is the picture...just perfect! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Your too good at these Charisma, always enjoy them very much Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Charisma, Just beautiful I really like this  Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
James: thank you dear friend Sunshine: thank you for this grand compliment Karilea Nancy: thank you for your kind reply ((hugs)) Titia: so glad that you enjoyed it Tara:thank you for the beautiful.....glad you liked it  [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 12-10-2001).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Charisma- You have a wonderful way of saying so much with just a few words...and so beautifully. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Yes, I like this too. Very good. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh gosh...I wanted to just sit on the bank and enjoy nature. Stunning......what a wonderful feeling of serenity came with this poem. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Zukene_Chic Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 152Cali |
It's lovely |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
bridge connect two shores Threads of life in harmony ============================= And we are all connected across the distances by our words lovely Charisma....you do these Tankas to poetic perfection. well done poetess C. |
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