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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
The night was long to be left all alone, And books began to be comfort while there Silent in my longing within my home Safely sitting in my reclining chair. Eyes had closed before you came through the door, Waking me from the deep dreams of the night, Smiling for you being at home once more As you spoke of a delay in the flight. I helped with your coat as I got from my chair, While I listened to you gently complain, And in a quick motion let down your hair, Then in a soft moment showed me you care. I once didn’t know what a kiss could do, Till I received one from beautiful you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Son, Lovely poem lovely write. |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
Seymour, It’s nice when events can produce dreams that can be caught on paper, thanks for the kind words. Bill |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this Son...James |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Well now - We have here an incurable romantic... this is quite a lucky lady to have a Son Netier waiting for her upon her return from where ever her flight took her... Very nice, sir... You've got me reading - and even enjoying your creative Son Netier formats...  |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* romance flows from your pen and I love the way the words come together as I read them. A very lucky lady is she who holds such a love as you give her. Wonderful writing. You know, of course, I love it. **hugs**   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is romantic, now I must warn you sometimes we are tempted to actually write real life events here on these blue pages  not that anyone ever would!Enjoyed, keep them coming Kathleen (Kay) |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
James, Thanks Nan, If you have a cure, best keep it to yourself, now don’t take, just keep it. There are some things a person doesn’t mind waiting for. Startime, Your sweet words are an encouragement for me. Kay, Well I believe Romance can be very real, Another, why sure, I’ve got another ready to go on the top line right now, sort of the next day. Bill |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely, Son. Corinne |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet Son, you are always soooooooo romantic in your lovely words! (sigh) May her arrival in your heart be there forever, filling your heart with love and happiness! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Son, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW OH WOW!! Sorry..that's about all I can manage at the moment....and a *sigh* ~Hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Son--You have captured the moment perfectly, with just the right touch of tender and human. Much enjoyed! |
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