Open Poetry #17 |
Great White Water Eagle |
D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Let your soul out to fly the open sky of your thoughts riding the winds of your inner perfection. You sometimes have to write from so deep in you that the words take flight on their own, as did the words of wisdom stated simply here. ++++++++++++++++ Oh Great White Water Eagle Spread your giant wings Over the waters of thought Reaching every pore of your body From the torrents of your inspiration Rush your way along To spread your message Of love in hate Of the beauty out of ugliness Of life out of death Of something out of nothing Blending life’s pleasures To simulate the readers senses In the wildest ride imaginable To open the mind in a state of inquiry In the magic of words growing before you On paths going everywhere You can think to use your imagination To rise in a sunrise and set in a sunset Opening up a blanket of star light To cover your dreams With the moon’s halos seeking to illuminate more In a dark passage of time And as the stars shoot across the skies With each finding a separate end Life sleep is awakened in a bird song So fly Great White Water Eagle Join the chorus Shriek your message in a nerve-ending chill But stay the path of the ever-seeking eye Reaching in the flight of the fantasies To amuse yourself in the rides of you’re fancy In a feather you drop to wish the receiver well The strength within it is felt For this feather will send the power To create the armor to do battle To catch the readers mind And to imprison his time To implant the garden of delight That they will depart with In the dance of life flying so high With the bird of flight Called the Great White Water Eagle Of emotion in the simplest of words Saying so much To draw a tear from some And a deep smile from others Implanting in them The beauty of the written word Seeded in the mind D.Lester Young (12/3/01) Tuscaloosa, AL Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! Yes, may we all embrace each sunrise and sunset with a smile and find inspiration through wisdom, be feathered in the light and seek the beauty of the written word deep in all our hearts, as the eagle you are! (smiles) I LOVE IT!!! YOUR WORDS ARE FABULOUS!!! I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Visions of such wonderful beauty flow from you pen bringing to life a fantasy of thoughts that are filled with wisdom...Magnificent. I love it. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Implanting in them The beauty of the written word Seeded in the mind You are doing a fine job at that! Majestic and visionary. The analogy is amazing. Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow* what a beautiful image you present here. Beautiful thoughts that moved my soul. Thank you for sharing Charisma |
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