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Suetang
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0 posted 2001-11-18 08:11 PM


I could try to pen a love song
Or sing words of love so true
As I try to describe in detail
How much love I have for you

I bloom within your radius
As you lift me high above
So crucial you are to my happiness
As you surround me with your love

I shine just like a beacon
Whenever you are near
My limbs sometimes turn to jelly
At the sound of your voice I hear

This love I've found is so precious
How I'll treasure it and watch it grow
You mean more to me than anything
I just wanted you to know

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-18 08:15 PM


Sue,  your love flows through your words.
This poem flows very well...nice read.

Startime
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2 posted 2001-11-18 08:23 PM


Your words say clearly what you feel in your heart. I hope they get to read of all the tender words you pen of your love. Very beautiful and filled with love.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2001-11-18 09:55 PM


Sue this is gorgeous! You have a beautiful heart
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4 posted 2001-12-08 01:10 AM


Sue,
I always enjoy how you express your love. Well done.

The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present!

Saunni
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5 posted 2001-12-08 08:53 PM


Simply Beautiful!! I love this and even read it twice  

Sauni @~~~>~~

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Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
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6 posted 2001-12-08 08:59 PM




(sigh) Oh Sue, you are sooooooooo romantic! (sigh) He means so much to you, and you will always mean so much to him, for your love is eternal! (sigh) Such sweetness and tender love fills these gorgeous words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2001-12-08 09:02 PM


This is very sweet, Sue - Is it any wonder why we men love you women so much?  You have represented all women well with a softness and loving spirit that makes this world a fit place to live.
Suetang
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8 posted 2001-12-09 05:25 AM


Wow! How very humbled am I by your gracious words.  There is no wonder why I am inspired to keep on with my writing after such lovely comments.  Thank you all so very much.
Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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9 posted 2001-12-09 10:41 AM


You express the deepest wells of your heart. I always know you will be flowing with emotion and sharing sincere love. Bravo to such freedom! Many hugs!

Sincerely,
Regina

Kalexi
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10 posted 2001-12-10 02:49 PM


This was very beautiful! Great write enjoyed this one alot!

Take care, and Happy holidays!

Kalexi

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11 posted 2001-12-10 03:33 PM


Hi, im replying again, but this was just so pretty Sue!

Domzi
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12 posted 2001-12-10 06:24 PM


Such a beautiful write!
Sounds just like a song of love.

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

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