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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Sitting unseen amidst the trees a chaw of baccer and my shotgun and me Slapping skeeters and spittin juice waiting on that whitetail moose Heart pounding as I listen to a sound Deer appears but antlers can't be found A doe blowing and wagging or tail I'm waiting for a buck so all well Heart pounds as I hear a grunt of a buck I can already see him in the back of my truck My picture is blurred by falling rain, soggy baccer and underwear stains At last he moves in on this lovely doe My God!What a beautiful trophy to bestow I looked upon this buck with my blushing eyes As I listen to the pleasures of the doe's cries Mind saying shoot,my heart knowing not what to say I guess the doe was the only trophy getting mounted this day |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I like this. My father loves to go up north and hunt! I don't think I'd ever do it though...I feel bad to harm living things. well besides roaches and stuff like that!  |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
There is no such thing as a white tail moose!!! Unless of course you believe in jack-a-lopes and snowsnakes as I do!! What a piece...no pun here. I liked it. |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Stevie,I liked the poem even if I don`t like for you to hunt.  Love,mama  |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Stevie...I loved your poem, now just don't go hunting any chipmunks or I will never forgive you.    copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear SP, You just stop that! They need their privacy.(I loved the first few lines-they were hilarious even before you told the joke!)  Nan |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Stevie darling boy, wonderful  I love the joke, and adore the way you wrote this. First class. So shall I come a hunting then darling boy? Wouldn't you make a lovely trophy, I could keep you right beside Roger. I have the perfect place for you, both of you. You are a matched pair after all.  Damm it I promised your Mama that I wouldn't harm you. So I'd best leave you where you are then. I know I'll send the wench in, you know you can't resist the flames Then I've got you     Love and warm stuff as always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Stevie, I too have family that love to hunt, like my uncle likes to do it! (sigh) I'm not the hunting type at all, I love animals and don't believe I can hurt a single one! (sigh) What a wonderful expression of a memory! BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Stevie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Joe Lamando Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 124Massachusetts,USA |
Sodpossum, You know that I can appreciate the feeling from my post of Hunter. Love the humorous twist, or should I say trist? Joe Lamando |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling*mmmmm now this is the best kind of hunting. Love wins the biggest trophy. **hugs** for letting love sway your markmanship. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love wins over all! Good write! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sounds like that scene could be a centerfold for Field and Stream! Nicely penned.... |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I do love venison, but I'm glad this one got away. |
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