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Abigaile
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0 posted 2001-11-29 01:13 PM


I dreamed of you last night.
I dreamed of love,
and of passion.
I dreamed that we were bound
for all eternity.
Our hearts were joined
and our souls mingled.
Time and distance
had no chance
of destroying
this love.
It had tried
and it had failed.
I dreamed of you last night.
A dream
so startling real,
so tangible,
so vivid.
And when I awoke
I found you lying next me
and I knew
this dream
was real.

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

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1 posted 2001-11-29 01:25 PM


Oh I love this! I'm glad your dream was real! (hugs)

RP

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2 posted 2001-11-29 02:28 PM


Beautiful!  

I loved it!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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3 posted 2001-12-04 07:27 PM


so good to find out that dreams could be real...

Charisma

~*Theresia~*

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4 posted 2001-12-08 11:22 PM


I love dreams and poems about dreams and dreams that become reality...this poem has it all.....Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

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5 posted 2001-12-08 11:33 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Abigaile, this is soooooooo beautiful! (smiles) I am so happy this dream was real, and true love is with your heart! (sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet Abigaile, I always love your words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Abigaile, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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