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amusemi
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0 posted 2001-12-08 01:23 PM


Children
Oh, the children
So innocent
And naive.
In fairy tales
And mysteries
In their subconscience
They believe.


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1 posted 2001-12-08 01:31 PM




CLAPPING WILDLY!!! Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, the love and innocence of children shine in your lovely poem! (smiles) WHAT A BEAUTIFUL DEBUT!!! (big hugggssssss) I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine puon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-08 01:48 PM


Hi!! Welcome to passions! This is just lovely! Children are a precious gift!
I know you will love it around here

Magnus
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3 posted 2001-12-08 02:06 PM


Yes...they are...and so trusting in us to
give them our love and safety...Welcome to
Passions.

Enchantress
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4 posted 2001-12-08 02:16 PM



Wonderful First Post!
I'll be watching for more from you!
   ~Hugs, Nancy Lee~


"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

[This message has been edited by Enchantress (edited 12-08-2001).]

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5 posted 2001-12-08 02:33 PM


I am still a child, for I still choose to believe in many of those fantasies and faery tales. They often help me swim safely  through the roughest rivers of reality.
A very fine first post. Welcome to Passions.

sodpossom
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6 posted 2001-12-08 02:36 PM


Children are indeed a precious gift.What I would give to go back to their innocents.Very nice poem!

Stevie

"In all things tried,you did the best you could do"

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7 posted 2001-12-08 03:15 PM



Welcome to Passions!  Please check your E-mail for a special Greeting!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.


EagleScorpion
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8 posted 2001-12-08 04:06 PM


This is a great idea for a first post. Very symbolic, almost. This poem reminds me of a song by the name of "Children", probably because it has the same name! but its a beautiful techno concoction by Robert Miles.. you probably heard the un-remixed version..but.ahem.. anyways...
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MAY YOUR SKILL AND SPIRIT GROW WITH US!!!!!!

Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for.

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9 posted 2001-12-08 04:10 PM


Hi Amusemi, Welcome to Passions...
a very beautiful poem about innocence.

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Irish Rose
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10 posted 2001-12-08 04:41 PM


Welcome, this is a wonderful first post!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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