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A Rhyme With No Rhythm
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A Rhyme With No Rhythm |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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I awake early, rising from thoughts of new. Wondering how to dress tonight for the many faces, for my preview... I'll "wow" them in my velvet black with sheerness through and through. Tonight, I'll be the one unmasked a Cinderella, true. They'll never know, the fear inside of first times needing start. But each dance I dance, each touch I share, will show then, I have heart. My smile will spread the joy I can with effort, from within. I will own them with this smile, new friendships to begin. Finally, my life will dance to rhythms beat, though slow increasing, day by day, the tune, my melody will show. It won't be long, I feel the pull the outside world does hold. The magnetism it exudes allows me to unfold, to share now parts I've hidden long, those feelings kept in place. Tonight, as Cinderella, I unmask a brand new face. ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cinderella~ 'Finally, my life will dance to rhythms beat, though slow increasing, day by day, the tune, my melody will show. My goodness .... this is just stunningly lovely~ Dance doll .... you deserve it~  Love ya' *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wynter, A wonderful write and I really enjoyed the read. *L* |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is a beautiful poem...absolutely beautiful and says so much about your inner self. No mask needed. Kathleen (Kay) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Marge, Sy and Kay..*s..tonight for me will almost be like a Debutante Ball...I will be going to a new place, with new acquaintances, to eat, drink and be merry..and for the first time in a very long time, I think I shall be doing all three. I may just have a new picture of me to replace the one with that tiring smile and a wonderful poem to go a long with it..this time, you will see the elegant me... thank you each, for reading and for your kindness and support always, Maureen "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul." (J.Garland) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 12-08-2001).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Maureen, I'm so happy for you. This is great news. Send me a picture of Cindarella! Hope you had a ball.  The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Larry (my favorite brother's name*s) I am glad you are smiling for me. The event is tonight..it is sleeting here now, and I am hoping it lets up a bit. I have been looking forward to putting my best foot forward and dancing the night away. No one has seen me dance on here...but I am the ballerina of the ball, when I do. I have been kept from myself for several years now, and although I have tried this past year or so to sneek out, I haven't succeeded..but I promised myself, tonight was the night... I will shed my cocoon, dry my wet, spread my wings and be the social butterfly of old. A Shame no one will be able to see it... but maybe they will catch a glimpse of me in a morning poem... thank you for even caring to respond... ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul." (J.Garland) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 12-08-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) YAY!!! Oh Maureen, this is sooooooo beautiful, your beautiful heart shines like the princess you are! (smiles) May the sweetest love and friendships stay close to your heart always, as we all are friends to you too! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo beautiful, we all love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a wonderful adventure, Cinderella Wynter. That smile will surely capture the hearts that dance around you. I'll be looking forward to Cinderella and her poetry, though the Wynter I see is quite dear to me. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am pleased you get so excited in your responses...and I know some of it is generic for I know the we all love you part is not true..but it does make me smile when I think of it..thank you Noah..*s hugss Midnitesun, yes I am venturing out tonight in about 3 hours or so my first real Un date in years ...meaning I go alone...oh I expect my heart to be the one dancing around others and as far as capturing goes..for now, those days are put aside. And I assure you, there will be poetry written tonight. *s Thank you for the sweet words, today. hugss ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Wynter - you know my thoughts, your writing is telling, and touches me... I remember, those Tight Blue Jeans... BC |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Wonderful poem.I hope everything turns out wonderful for you on your date also.Nice job! Stevie |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hi BC..yes I was telling..at least to you, but that's cause you know me. I hope to catch up with you soon, but I think I wasn't the one wearing those blue jeans that afternoon, was I? If I remember correctly it was Blue Jeans and Shades and a wonderful barbill that made me laugh and laugh for the first time, I believe. I remember events that are meaningful to me, and meeting you was one. I hope you will think of me tonight, because when I am dancing I will be smiling for you, knowing you are dancing for my happiness. Thanks  Oh well, I better quit while I am ahead and still feeling sprite. *s hugss my friend M "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Whoops, I almost forgot you, Stevie. Oh this isn't really a date, since I am going alone..but it is a celebration of sorts...Thank you for reading and responding *s ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wynter...seems like Winter caught up with you. Hope the dance went well and you were the belle of the ball.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
  Maureen, You sweet and wonderful creature you!! You go girl!! Dance and laugh and enjoy the night! Can't wait to hear what happened! You deserve the best! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Carol Luna Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 55 |
yes, have a wonderful time, there is something about painting the town red and I have a feeling from reading this thread, you are gong to do just that!!!!! Now, party! Carol Luna |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Have a great time tonight, Wynter... Dance the night away...have a ball. Great poem :spinning:      copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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