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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-12-08 03:50 PM


How far can your arms take me
tonight?
After a rough day at work
all I want to do
is be here with you
Alone
the three of us
our love, me and you
This feeling so tender
which makes me surrender
Let's leave
problems outside
these four walls
and just love and love
So I'm ready
here we go
take me to where desire
leads us
and keep me there all night
until the morning opens
our eyes to another day
Then I'll count every minute
until I return to you

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2001-12-08 03:54 PM




(smiles) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet Walker, may his arms take you very far into eternal loves world! (smiles) Sooooooo beautiful! May true love forever fill your loving heart! (sigh) We all love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

EagleScorpion
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2 posted 2001-12-08 03:54 PM


this was a superb expression of your undying love for that lucky someone. Good work, godbless and godspeed
RosePetal
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3 posted 2001-12-08 03:56 PM


Oh Walker, you always WOW me! You have such talent!! Enjoyed this very much

Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-12-08 04:42 PM


very nice, Walker, very warm expression of desire...

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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