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The Sight of You
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The Sight of You |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States 
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The Sight of You By Larry Chadwick I watched you pass on by, Saw you from head to toe. It did my eyes so much good, But this I wanted you to know. There was a certain something, Rarely is it ever really seen. You equal more than your parts, And let me tell you what I mean. Without question you look fine, The whole package is complete. Your gorgeous legs how they stride, As they are directed by your feet. The curves and sway of your hips, Draw just a slight bit of attention. And as for the rest of what I saw, It is worthy of special mention. Your hair looked ever so fine, Roaming there would be bliss. That smile that looks so warm, With lips that beg for a kiss. I turned as you passed on by, The irresistibleness of you. The pleasure of watching you go, As fun as was your approach too. But what really stayed in my mind, Was that feeling that made me whole. When I looked deep into your eyes, I knew that I could see your soul. The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
The irresistibleness of you. this poem was just that..irresistible..*s ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Hi Wynter, It's nice to hear from you. I'm glad you liked this. Thanks.  The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present! |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Larry, All I can say is this really touched me from head to toe! Love ya Cindi |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very nice, Larry...just the way a woman wants to be remembered. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Cindi, Oohlala! Sweet...  Kacy, Oh good. I pleased. |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Ohh..I love this! It has a sassy attitude..fun...and yet respectful it seems. And the ending..the eyes. Someone once told me I had very expressive eyes..although..not in such a way as this! enjoyed! I am many. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Siofra, Just the exact tone I was after. But had my doubts with no feed back. Bless you. Gotta love those sexy eyes most!  |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
...waiting for part II on this....just for the soul stories, you know..  ..much enjoyed... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
amigo, Nice idea! LOL |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Larry, ya done good guy! Ruined my original plans with its beauty, though. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Interloper, Disarmed you, eh? Cool! [This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 12-11-2001).] |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Larry, Oh I like this You know just how to make a lady feel special Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling wickedly* Lost in her eyes, eh? This is so cute and so real. I love it. **hugs**   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
My heavens, I've been away for awhile and you've gone all romantic while I was gone...what happened??? Lol Seriously, this is beautiful and I love those last lines When I looked deep into your eyes, I knew that I could see your soul Now that's what a woman wants to hear!!! If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Larry! This is how a woman wants to be remembered....not just the package we come in but the soul....the entire being...am I making myself clear? *It's the meds for the pneumonia...make me dizzy* I know, I was this way before, but, now I have something to blame it on! LOL. This is way cool! ~Hugs, Nancy Lee~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Larry, you are soooooooo romantic, this poem is soooooooo beautiful! (smiles) Your beautiful heart always sings with loves words! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have suhc a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Tara, Good deal. 'Cause I felt like I was walking a fine line on this one... Karen, Yup, what a place to be lost too! Tracey, Hey, who knows, I might figure this romance stuff out yet. Nancy Lee, What's with the lecture? LOL I knew this was a squeeker, but geesh...take a pill!ROTFLMAO Noah, That makes two. I'm on a roll! |
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