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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Dearest.... Why do you love this man? I ask these words, wondering... Am I not just that, just a man? Or, am I to you, something else? I gave you my heart, you cherished it. My soul, you made it your own. My eyes, you looked into their depths. My life, you changed it. How can I ever doubt you? Ever feel a pang of jealousy? Ever be insecure of us? Feel anxiety, feel fear. Why, if I do love you, do I? Why do I sometimes wonder? Is it wrong to feel these feelings? Am I wrong? The depths of space is shallow. My heart’s love ever so deep. The end of time is felt near Our love.....eternal Love me unconditionally, freely. Give to me only yourself, your heart. I will guard, cherish and comfort you. You my dear, are just like me. There is no one like us........ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It just doesn't get any better than this does it, Barry? Kathleen (Kay) |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
In questioning love, we come to understand it. Beautifully said sir.  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Magnus, your heart ever shines with such true love that shines like the sun! (sigh) You are everything she desires, and she will love you always, for your love is so much more to her and heavenly! (sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may she eternally answer all your questions of love! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magnus, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kay...nope...does not...Now to just live it that way...completely...takes lots of effort and LOVE...I am trying. All I can do. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Poet deVine..thanx...loving her is easy... showing her takes work...I am working at it. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Noah...just one more little expression, sharing feelings. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sounds wonderful to me...just as I seem to feel. thanks for sharing *s ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Awww you and your wife mean the world to eachother!! There should be more men like you out there but good men like you are a rarity! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wynter....I may never be the complete man of my words....but I am trying to be one that is loved and respected...And I am trying to give her the same. Is not always an easy thing to do...we both are human and walk an occasional bumpy road. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx RP....I just want to be about half of what my words are....and keep trying to be more...Yep...she has been very good to me. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautifully done, Magnus. It sounds like you two have a very special relationship.    copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sounds like there's no question at all to the testament of this life, times two... Thank you... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* the love and romance you feel for your sweet wife, flows like sweet, wild honey from your pen. Very deliciuos to the taste. I love it. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Someone told me once that Romance can be had, passion can be felt....but LOVE must be earned. If your words are any reflection of the kind of man that you are,,,then you are treasure to behold. Till next time... ~timothysangel Dont let it end like this, tell them I said something. ~Pancho Villa |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!!! "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
You may be only a man to others but obviously much more to her.....this is wonderful!!!! Bridgette  |
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