Open Poetry #17 |
WARRIOR WOMAN (dedicated to Irish Rose, Wynter and all the ladies at Passions) |
Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Dear Ladies of Passions....As you read this poem you will see why there is a piece of each of you within this poem. Each of you have shared the hurts and trials of your lives and survived while giving love, support and compassion to everyone here. Know that in doing so you have won the greatest of battles and are indeed, WARRIOR WOMEN!!! I LOVE YOU ALL, DEARLY. **hugs** Warrior Woman Joy courses through the breast of this Warrior Woman, for I know I have fought the battles of my life and am the victor Now begins my journey to reach the world of the man whose love has given me the strength to face the twisted trails of my life and self The battles have been hard fought and won, with fear and pain stalking each path chosen as I steadfastly move, courageously, forward Determination is the pure, strong, steed upon which I ride through nightmare realities that I may come face to face with my fears Willingness the armor, that protects me from hurt revisited, as it shields me from the greatest hurt, to finally be banished Sent from the Higher Power this man who holds my heart ever urges me forward as he casts light into a darkness, black with the pain of a lifetime filled with rejection Knowing the battles must be won that my dreams may be finally realized, and I may finally join with the man I love With courage and an awareness that the Higher Power is with me, I surg forward with my whole heart Battles many, be they large or small, must be waged from a life so filled with pain, unending as they are faced, fought and won Gaining strength and self-esteem with each battle makes my armor shine the brighter as I fight the battle of my life Joy fills the breast of this Warrior Woman as I kneel, with love, at the feet of this man who fills my dreams and spirit for he is the reward blessed to me The gift I bring is the precious gift of self with willingness, determination and courage showing a woman now freed to love completely Karen Torbiak© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 12-07-2001).] |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Very well written Startime !! Funny how I came across this just tonight as I sat down at my PC to start on my nest literary masterpeice (HA HA) Really, it is an assignment for one of my classes. At any cost...in one of my paragraphs as I am giving advice to my daughter for when she is older I tell her that she was born with a "warriors heart". Strange to me how us ladies are so far apart in distances and yet somehow connected by something so powerful as a common thought. May the wonders of our sisterhood never cease. God Bless Unfulfilled desires are dangerous forces |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*grin* keep telling her and she will always have the heart of a Warrior. I wish I had felt that way when raising my daughters. **big hugs** such a small world that brings us so close in so many ways. Love to you, dear one. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
And while we are indeed warriors for having endured so much, we are also ladies, passionate, caring, and sharing in sisterhood. A wonderful write that needs be tucked into my lil ole jewel box, Karen .... listen as I softly whisper...... thank you for this one. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Is it just me or is there A LOT of WOMAN POWER going around these boards tonight? I ADORE this, Lady! Its truly wonderful! Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Warrior you be and warrior you are, all of you. Very well written, Startime, very well indeed...very gentle smile |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Startime,a wonderfulpoem!:clap: Juanita |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I just saw this. Wow, Karen, this is great. YES, warrior women, we should start a group, support for those who are still struggling, what am I saying, I'm still struggling!! God love ya! Kathleen (Kay) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you Karen, you are right, looking to the higher power will bring more satisfaction and calmness to my life. Your poem was beautiful. Thank you for your thoughts. hugss Maureen/Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
BRAVO!! Karen, you have penned a wonderful tribute to the spirit force of strong women everywhere. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
This is so wonderful Karen! We are all indeed Warrior Women and we can endure whatever battle we face! Well said! Thank you for this. (((BIG hugs)) |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very nice dedication for the ladies! Stevie |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karen this is wonderful! Thank you so much! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Thank you Karen for such a wonderful tribute to all of us women. I'm saving this one. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
What a gorgeous dedication to the women of Passions..... Thanks for sharing it! Its also a tribute to strong women, everywhere. copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Karen, this is us, because it has to be. We became warriors by default. But hey, let's run with it now Love Sandra |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I love it! |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Femininity is very powerful...you have versed the warrior in us all. Bravo Ms Karen!!! I love this! Saving this always. Sincerely, Regina |
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Virgo_Rains Member
since 2001-12-03
Posts 54Pacific Northwest, U.S.A. |
OH WOW! This is absolutely beautiful! Women have a way of always finding their inner strength whether through lifes trials or with the undying love of their "heart"...I am so happy for you and yours Blessings and thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem... VR |
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