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'night love you see ya in the mornin'
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'night love you see ya in the mornin' |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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there was a time when words would spill from our mouths like water running through a spigot children, were we, repeating what we'd heard but like a lullaby, it was our ritual said quickly and rhythmically some of the words were lost in the spiel but the important ones were always there... we grew older and the words began to feel their meaning-- not so quickly said tonight sometimes interrupted with your echo-- or mine... i want to tell you brother, i remember still, the simple words that came to mean so much this night, let me sing to you again the lullaby we started as children, separating each verse, to feel its warmth... "goodnite" dear brother... "i love you" ...always... "i'll see you in the morning..." or at least, in the morrow... -dgv4 12-7-01 for dgv3  ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
mm.. your words are very true. Many children always tend to have many things to say, without any second thoughts about it.. but that changes. . and thats not necessarily a bad thing! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh my, I know just what you mean, we have so much to say when we're yoing but the way we express ourselves is so very different! (smiles) Such innocence fills this sweet poem, I love you, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Dg..I like this a lot. Sometimes it take effort to hold a family together. Great read. alan |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
This is a wonderful poem that touches the heart of this reader. *sigh* such soft tenderness within your words. I love it. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Nice write, warm feelings. [This message has been edited by insect (edited 12-09-2001).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
oops, should never use somebody elses computer. Loved this write sweets. Nice to see a brother and sister closeness. Parker |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
dgvarner... Sometimes I don't think I'm as close to my sister as I should be. Very soon she's going to need all the support she can get, and I want to be part of that. Thank you for sharing this beautiful and heart felt poem with us. Bec "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you." |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
EAGLE SCORPION..children do tend to have a lot to say dont they..lol eventually, it is my hope, that my little one will realize what the words truly mean.. thanks for your reply..NOAH..i'm glad you enjoyed thanks for reading..ALAN..effort it does take..but when you enjoy each other, it doesnt seem like such an effort..  thanks STARTIME..glad to have touched your heart !thanks.. uh...INSECT? lol ....thanks anyway... PARKER..LOL@you...! (better you than me...  ) thank you PARKER.. BEC..i dont think there is a "should be" in the closeness of siblings...just a matter of heart and how you learn to lend it i'm sure you will be a wonderful support for you sister..  thanks for reading.. (ps..love your pooh quote!) hugs, g [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 12-09-2001).] |
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