Open Poetry #17 |
Help Me Mend My Broken Heart |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
It's been hurt beyond repair During the times when you weren't there It's been fooled and torn apart Please help me mend my broken heart We could patch it up with glue But that surely wouldn't do Or put the pieces back in place But there'd still be an empty space Only one type of medicine will do A prescription of love from you But there's no doctor in the house As I cower like a mouse My heart is not the same anymore Since you walked out of my door As the tears fall freely from my eyes And I bid your love goodbye Suetang |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I wish I could help you. I am an expert at having a broken heart but in all my years I have never learned how to mend one. My heart goes out to you. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, my heart goes oit to you; I pray with all my heart that a loving heart can reach out to you and give you this prescription of love! (sad sigh) My heart cries out to you, sweet friend! We all love you so very much, sweet Sue! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Emotion of something lost ride high in this. Yet I see hope in "And I bid your love goodbye", as to someone who will adjust to it afterwards. Good flow and meaning! Blessings in the love's we will find that we can flower in!! |
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Keith Morgan Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 114Md |
Beautifully written and heartfelt. Love will soon find you, once again. Keep the faith. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Very beautifully penned. Keep faith, and soon your broken heart will mend. Timothys Angel Dont let it end like this, tell them I said something. ~Pancho Villa |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I understand this so well, it hurts a lot. I wish I knew why it goes like this so often. I hope your heart heals soon. Sandra |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Hearts are fragile things. They contain the essence of who we are, what we feel, and how we view the world. They are warmed by the kindness of others or bruised by a careless word from a friend. On rare occasions we hand our heart to someone for a brief moment, to give that special person a glimpse of a private place within our soul or to see how the moment will be cherished. It is on these occasions bonds grow stronger or snapped and rarely mended. The more we share our heart the bigger it grows and the more open and loving we become. A heart cannot be stolen or it will wither and die. It cannot be bought for the price is too high. It may only be borrowed for a very short while. Or maybe once in a lifetime exchanged with someone truly special, to forever be soul mates. RdanJ 3/2/01 Your poem brought this to mind. Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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