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Words Sing |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Words Sing His tender words still sing to me, as distance draws him near Soft spoken from a loving heart, he whispers in my ear A song of life comes from his words, sweet rhythm flowing pure With tones that stir my seeking soul my notice, he will lure Gently his words vibrate in me, caressing all senses Flowing deeply into my soul, breaking down defenses Warm is his breath upon my neck, while stirring passions fire He reaches me with unseen hands, filling me with desire Such words he sings from gentle heart, his poems, written with music Will he now see the full effect of weaving this magic? Karen Torbiak 2001© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
i hope he does recognize his spellbinding charm's effects on you.. as you have probably done so for him the same.. this is very pretty |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet Karen! (sigh) Your words always sing with romance, and may they always touch the heart of true love! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet star! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very very beautifully written, Karen... I loved it from start to finish and I bet he did too!   copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*grin* well considering he is a phantom of my dreams......maybe he does know...someday there will be a man like this for me. My poetry is based on fantasy..just my heart's desire. I am glad you all enjoyed it. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 12-07-2001).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done Karen. I'm enjoying your phantom lover also! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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