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Magnus
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0 posted 2001-12-07 08:40 PM


Let me share my love with you.
Let me take you to places only we know
Give me yourself completely, I will seduce you.
For I hunger for you now.

My arms have been empty.
A heart beat sad for many days.
Your voice, an aphrodisiac to my mind, soothed me.
I saw you there, a dress so sheer, hiding nothing.

Gentle curves graced my eyes.
Trembling so, I savored the moment.
Though I could not, my mind caressed you.
Your sigh of release made me smile.

Come into my dreams this night.
A fire burns brightly within my loins.
I will take you, take you again.
I need you now, be one with me.

© Copyright 2001 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-07 08:44 PM


*sigh* sensual magic with just the right amount of heat for me to love it. I wonder if it will stay here or be moved. Very hot, Magnus, and filled with such passion. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2001-12-07 08:51 PM


Good to see you, Barry.
This is.......whew!

Kathleen (Kay)
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Laurie Lee

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3 posted 2001-12-07 09:21 PM


Pretty passionate poetry, Magnus. Glad to see you again.
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4 posted 2001-12-07 09:27 PM


Mmmm this is magnificent. Keep these sensual poems coming

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 12-07-2001).]

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5 posted 2001-12-07 09:42 PM




(sigh) So sensually beautiful! (sigh) You will always have her heart melting with your sweet words! (sigh) You are soooooo romantic, sweet Magnus, this is so sensual and lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magnus, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Naoh Eaton



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Canada eh.
6 posted 2001-12-07 09:50 PM


Barry, this one is....

BUT...I like it!      ~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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