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Magnus
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0 posted 2001-12-07 08:11 PM


The loneliness of an isolated beach embraces me.
The winds howling in my ears, calling repeatedly.
Are you there beyond the raging surf?
If I wait, will you come with the foam peaks?

My prints, alone with none beside, tell a story.
A story of a man whose heart yearns to be touched.
Standing alone, thinking of moments shared.
Wanting to touch the one his heart tugs for.

Will you come from beyond the white surf?
Can my eyes again see the sparkle of your eyes?
I so desire to touch your face, taste your lips.
This loneliness I endure pains me greatly.

Come, walk the soft sands, hold my hand.
Let my strength carry you from afar.
Give my mind your own to share and touch
My passion fires within me, I wait for you.

Sleep restfully my beauty, for I am here.
Distant wings from afar bring me near.
My eyes see you within my weary mind.
For...tis you this man’s heart does find.

© Copyright 2001 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-07 08:15 PM




(sigh) Oh Magnus, this is soooooooo beautiful! (sigh) Your lovely passionate cries shine in all your romantic affectionate visions! (smiles) I've missed your words so much, dear friend, you always light these pages with your love! (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magnus, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-07 08:20 PM


*sigh* oh your words have been very missed. Romance fills the evening sky with your words that come with the sweet caress of gentle winds. I am lost in the beauty of this one, Magnus...so good to see you are back again. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Magnus
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3 posted 2001-12-07 08:22 PM


Noah,  thanks...happy to be back...Hawaii
was nice,  but very lonely...

Magnus
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4 posted 2001-12-07 08:24 PM


Star...thank you...glad to be back...just
very tired....and got lots of time to catch
up on my LouLou Belle and the kids...
Just wanted to give Passions something
for the evening...

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5 posted 2001-12-07 08:25 PM


Yay Magnus has returned!!! I was yearning for some more of your romantic poems.
This reminds me of a song by the band 3 Doors Down.  (Big Hugs)

RP

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6 posted 2001-12-07 08:28 PM


Very romantic and beautiful!
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7 posted 2001-12-07 09:04 PM


Someone was missed!  This is lovely.

Kathleen (Kay)
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8 posted 2001-12-07 09:10 PM



Very nice Magnus, thank you for this...

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9 posted 2001-12-07 09:38 PM


*sigh* Welcome back romantic one! *sigh*
You were missed!
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Magnus
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10 posted 2001-12-07 10:22 PM


Thanx RP...just thought I would let you all
have a couple of tidbits....Have missed my
writing the past 10 days

Magnus
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11 posted 2001-12-07 10:40 PM


Nancy...thank you very much....happy to be
back again.

sodpossom...thank you as well..

Karilea....your welcome...yes she was.
was a very lonely trip to paradise..

Kay...thankx...happy to be home right now.

Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2001-12-08 08:48 AM


Magnus~

'A story of a man whose heart yearns to be touched.
Standing alone, thinking of moments shared.
Wanting to touch the one his heart tugs for.'


Well ... this one sure 'tugs' my heartstrings~
Beautiful ... so good to see you~
*Hugs* n' *Tugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2001-12-08 08:54 AM


Magnus,
Enjoyed the read.

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