Open Poetry #17 |
How to Love a Man (For Auguste) |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
How to Love a Man When you have found that special love The one who trusts and honors you The stars will be a witness of One soul that sings the songs of two If love has crept into your heart And filled each breath with pangs of want The love that you will now impart Is from life’s ever flowing font For you will know innate desires Without a guide to see you through The burning flesh of passion’s fires Is but the pulse of life in you Your arms become his sweet caress Your sheets are now the midnight skies Let moonlight bathe your nakedness In pools of trust within his eyes You are his rose, his velvet bloom A flower within his tender keep Sweet petals he cannot consume From passion’s wells so full and deep In adoration, love him well No matter what the day or hour For love has not a space to dwell Nor does the fragrance of a flower And when you feel his mind afar In need of comfort from the day To sooth his soul, recall there are Three little words you need to say Then lay, when words are sweetly said A fragrant rose across his bed Elizabeth Santos |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Elizabeth! That is a great poem! I liked that. That truly is how to love a man... The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present! |
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True Reflections Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 143Ohio, USA |
Elizabeth, I'm having trouble breathing! This was a gorgeous telling of what love does to mere mortals and what has to be the best feeling in the world. Very well done. I shall kiss your hand as I bow to honor you. Roger |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, the delightful course and flow of courtship should never ever end just because the vows are said and the ring is firmly on the hand...it should go on for the lifetime of the marriage...this I so believe! Well done, Lady Santos! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
No one and I mean no one does it like you do Lady Santos!!!!!! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Liz, Thank you for this, my friend. It is truly breathtaking and I agree completely with the sentiment. Love is always and forever. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Liz, I love reading your poems. They flow so well, and tell so much. DID ALL YOU CAT LOVERS OUT THERE READ THIS POEM??? NOT ONE NEED FOR A CAT IN ALL THIS!!! NOT ONE!!! oops - please forgive me, Liz, as that sort of slipped out. I really like the way you closed this poem out so cleanly, and with such a beautiful, loving sentiment. Liz, I've said it to other people in conversations regarding you, but I need to say it to your face, you are an absolutely wonderful person! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Elizabeth, this is the most beautiful, straight from the heart poem I have read in a long while. Just wonderful! A real keeper! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you all for your very warming remarks. Thank you Auguste for the inspiration to write this poem. It means more than I can say. LngJhn, I hope we meet again soon. You are all so kind Liz |
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