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Madame Chipmunk
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0 posted 2001-12-06 05:40 PM



In Words...I find beauty
in words...I find peace
in parlance of living
in figures of speech

the comfort of writing
ink...meeting with page
the soothing of soul
the ebbing of rage

in rhyme...I find reason
for all of life's seasons
expressions of love and humor and pain
when written on paper...make me feel sane

the sacred union of paper and words
bonded by thought...these lovers converge
a marriage well scripted with love and with lust
in words of forever...laced with truth and with trust

Lyra

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

© Copyright 2001 Lyra Nesius - All Rights Reserved
EagleScorpion
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1 posted 2001-12-06 05:42 PM


this is very very true and very encouraging. I agree with you on everything you say in this. poetry soothes the soul.
Pilgrimage
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2 posted 2001-12-06 05:46 PM


Dear Lyra,
This is true for me as well, and beautifully expressed.

Nan

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3 posted 2001-12-06 05:48 PM


Lyra, I agree and very nicely penned as well.
Enjoyed, Nancy.

N orth Carolina Girl
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4 posted 2001-12-06 09:14 PM


Lyra,I think you know how beautiful this poem is.Another winner Take CARE!

Love,Juanita

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5 posted 2001-12-06 09:19 PM




(smiles) Oh Lyra, your words are soooooooo beautiful, such beauty and peace always fill them as your parlance shines with sunshine and timeless love! (smiles) BRAVO!!! (kiss on cheek) We all love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lyra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Irish Rose
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6 posted 2001-12-06 09:30 PM


Yes, exactly how I feel.  Words DO bring peace.  Thank you for this one.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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7 posted 2001-12-07 08:47 AM


Lyra,
The candlestick shape of your poem is the perfect symbol for the light-giving candle that you are. Soon as I figure out how to hug someone through a computer; watch out!

Roger

Marsha
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8 posted 2001-12-07 09:29 AM


Lyra darling girl this is utterly utterly wonderful. Such a joyous and wondrous poem.  
And I really love the thoughts and the truth it expresses
    
Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy
    

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


sodpossom
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9 posted 2001-12-07 08:48 PM


Lyra
So beautiful and truthful!This one ranks right up there!

Stevie

"In all things tried,you did the best you could do"

Startime
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10 posted 2001-12-07 09:25 PM


BRAVO!!!!This is exactly how I feel but I could never have expressed it as well as you have here. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Madame Chipmunk
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11 posted 2001-12-16 02:29 PM


Thanks so much for your reply, Eagle Scorpion...and poetry truly does soothe the soul...thats why I write it.
Its much cheaper than a therapist.
    

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Madame Chipmunk
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12 posted 2001-12-16 02:31 PM


Nan, Nancy, Juanita and Noah....
Thanks so much for liking my words...
That means a lot to me.
        

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Madame Chipmunk
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13 posted 2001-12-16 02:42 PM


Kay and Marsha...
thanks so much for your replies,
It means a lot to me that you liked my poem.
             

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Madame Chipmunk
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14 posted 2001-12-16 02:48 PM


Startime, Roger and Stevie....
Thanks so much for your replies...
Writing is very soothing...even though sometimes it doesn't turn out like I want it to...its still great therapy.
      


Roger...this is how you give someone a hug through the computer.

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Larry C
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15 posted 2005-08-23 09:49 PM


Well dear lady. In this you wrote a keeper. I must put into words this day that while you are gone, you are not forgotten. These are truly words to cherish.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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