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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-11-29 10:22 PM



Moon In Mesmerize

~*Marge Tindal*~


~Certainly a
fullest phase of moon
on this November night
Pregnant with glowing of
iridescently-shown light
We've only to look to
the sky to see the
mesmerize~

~*~

~She phases plumb
full with her grace-of-face
Sending to us just the hinting
traces of memories glowing far
into the night sky, leaving us to
wonder just why - there is such
a fond glow on the earth below
when in shining of her fullest
light upon us -joy is mine
in this beautiful glow
of knowing~

~*~

~November of
moon so high in the sky
I so often thank God for His
eyes of realize ~ knowing that
I can see His promise forever
in glowing of alabaster moon
Short on full - yet phasing
to be in perfections rise
of sweet harmony
So soon~



~Three minute moon - for TrickyVicky~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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vlraynes
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1 posted 2001-11-29 10:28 PM



Marge-
   Yep...I knew it.  When you got quiet all of
   the sudden, I just knew you were off writing
   a little moon ditty.
   This is awesome...how you can pen the moon
   so quickly...and, at the same time, so
   beautifully is beyond me...but I LOVE IT!
   Thanks, buddy..
   Love and big hugs,
   ~Vicky



  

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Songbird
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2 posted 2001-11-29 10:32 PM


Marge I do believe you've been moon-struck.
3 Moons every one of them lovely!

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3 posted 2001-11-29 10:45 PM


Marge, I do believe you have an affliction known as MOON MADNESS. LOL, I love it when the moon starts tugging your tides.
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4 posted 2001-11-29 10:45 PM


"It must have been moonglow....."
Love these Marge!  What a talent!  
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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5 posted 2001-11-29 10:52 PM




(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo gorgeous, I love it!!! (smiles) His porcelain face reflects her luna light, and promises will come true always! (big hugggssssss) You always bring light to the most beautiful visions! (kiss on cheek) I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2001-11-30 02:20 AM


Vicky~
Ahhhhh, but - but ... you inspire my pen sweet friend~

SongBird~
I'm SURE of it~

MidniteSun~
Guilty as charged~
Please tell me there's no cure !

Enchantress~
Awwww, what a sweetie you are~

Noah~
Thank you for the read and the reply.


*Hugs* to all~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2005-11-15 10:15 AM



-ing .... just on accounta'

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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