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Pink Stars |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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Pink Stars Through my telescope I admire the stars Intrigued by their flashing blink They were surreal by far The color of a baby pink I've never seen stars such as these I studied them closely They seem to duplicate in the breeze Shining with radiance The following afternoon found myself in the bookstore Interested in the pink stars Desiring to know much They were known as "love stars" Considered to be very rare Noted as Good luck charms To rid lovers of their despair Instructed to make a love wish I did so obeying my gut feeling That night I dreamed of the perfect "fish" And awoke to the same pink stars on my ceiling I didn't know what to think I was amazed to say the least Drawn in by their millisecond blink Never wanting it to cease A month went by Searched for those stars every night Maybe it was only a trick played by my eyes but the pink stars were nowhere in sight Then one day, I met this man He asked me If I knew anything about pink stars I knew he just wouldn't understand So I replied "well the yellow are better by far! We fell in love within five months flat He was the one I was dreaming of Pink stars, I thank for that Those skyline cupids of love |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
stars.... so strange so strange. Just imagine, there HAS to be another solar system like hours out there. I guess I'd say, if it is just us, seems like an awful waste of space, doesn't it? Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RosePetal, Cute, I ennjoyed the read. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very sweet, Rosepetal..... I think those pink stars must have been the tips of cupids arrows   Lyra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (CLAPPING WILDLY IN SMILES, KISSING YOUR LIPS) Oh my gosh, I never knew that! (smiles) I will always love you, sweet lady sparrow, for together we will look upon thes estars in the sky and watch as the ponk stars flash with cupid arrow light! (sigh) I love you, sweet Joanna, you are soooooooooo romantic! Showers your lips with kisses) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joanna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful, will look for these pink stars. Enjoyed it very much  Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Carol Luna Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 55 |
This is beautiful. Carol Luna ~give me peace, no matter what the cost~ [This message has been edited by Carol Luna (edited 12-06-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is so neat! Rosepetal, I've had major problems with my aol, many are furious with me, but believe me, it's not me. Please feel free to e-mail me at irishkrose2001@yahoo.com and I'm sorry about the mix up. Thanks hon! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done Joanna! You're going to have everyone out there looking for pink stars...including me! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
What a sweet poem! Love can touch us in all aspects in life. I'm glad love has struck you. You have a nice and soft heart. Always keep it open! from your friend Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. [This message has been edited by Hypnosis (edited 12-06-2001).] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Aw, you're such a sweetie! Same thing happened to me and a girl but we were seeing pink elephants!  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I love stars, and PINK stars sound wonderful. And they evidently have quite an effect. Sandra |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
RosePetal,this was very romantic.  When my grandson gets old enough I`ll tell him about the pink stars.  Juanita  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Maybe I need to check out some pink stars...James |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
RosePetal... How sweet! I've never seen pink stars before, I'll have to keep an eye out. Bec "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you." |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Joana, What's with you and Regina seeing pink when you look up? Delightful poem. Almost as sweet as you! Now I gotta spend more time out in the dark...in the country I suppose. I can hardly wait! By the way, it's good to be seen. |
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DarkAngelChelle Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 87Kansas |
How sweet! We should all be so lucky as to see pink stars! (I've looked for mine, and just might have found them .) Thanks for the read ... it made me smile. ~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Tell me Rose Petal...are there really pink stars? James |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
WHOA!!! I had no idea this poem was going to be such a hit! 17 replies, wow.... Eagle: I agree with you for sure. Thanx! Seymour: I'm glad that I have brought you some enjoyment! Madame Chipmunk: Thank you sweetie, It's great to see you enjoying yourself around here Mistletoe Angel: You are the sweetest person I have ever met! You always make me blush! Thank You So Much! Charisma: I always enjoy your poetr, You are a sweetheart. Carol Luna: Thank you for stoppin in. I'll be sure to keep an eye out for your poetry! Irish Rose: Hey sweetness! I love getting feedback from you. You are most kind and loveable! Enchantress: Thank you pretty lady!! You are MY SHINING STAR**** Hypnosis: Thanx a bunch! Your compliments are precious to me. Balladeer: Pink elephants? LOL You always make me chuckle with that wonderful sense of humor! Catalinamoon: I too love stars. Keep reaching for them, you'll catch one! Thanks hun! N orth Carolina Girl: This poem was a change from my usual writings and it was a lot of fun to write! Give your precious grandson a hug for me! James: You don't need stars, you are a natural babe magnet! (hugs) Bec: thank you, I appreciate your replies! Larry: I think Regina and I are under a pink spell! Thanks for reading. I love hearing from you, and you're still my night-owl buddy! Chelle: Hey there! Looks like you are having a good time here in poetry land! Thank you for your kids words dear! James: I must have caught your attention for you to reply twice : ) I am sorry to disappoint you but I don't know if pink stars exists. I simply made this story poem up when my creative juices were flowing. Yellow stars are just as good! Thanks sweetheart. (hugs) |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Simply sweet..and wonderful to read, Joanna. I love this! Its wonderful to see you growing here. Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since |
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