Open Poetry #17 |
Still |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Still days lead days, all long gone by when first you searched into my eyes looked deep and fell into my soul and passed from young onto the old still I mesmerize you you say ‘tis so, my eyes still glow of love and life and laughter fine and you say how can it be so that rare am I as fine aged wine still I inebriate you you attempt to quietly understand this aging woman in your embrace calmly gaze with fond desire at the feathered lines about my face still I puzzle you emotions rampant run within most thin the essence of my skin and deep the well of love to find when you whisper “ come, be mine” still I mystify you know that forever there will be a “still” as wildflowers come to springtime’s hill as passion bends thus to loving will there shall always be the “still” in the still of the night in the silent of embrace in the still of always in the tranquil of grace there shall be this still for you the one that mesmerizes and inebriates the puzzle of the mystery there shall always be the still of me long until tomorrow 28 November 2000 repost 7 December 2001 |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I am stilled by such magnificent poetry... Regards, my friend, sudhir |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"emotions rampant run within most thin the essence of my skin and deep the well of love to find when you whisper “ come, be mine”" oh this is soooooooo beautiful. |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Sunshine,this was so sweet and sentimental Juanita |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is so soothing, just dropped packages all over the place from shopping and sat down and read this first, oooooohhhhh it is nice! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Karilea, so glad that you reposted. This is so very tender and lovely. Hugs to you. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling sister of my heart yes still utterly wonderful love truly wonderful. Love and warm stuff as always Puck To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you all, but I think I need to work on it... I do appreciate all your kindnesses... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea! THIS is exquisite! I love it! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
This is one lucky guy! For certain, this is one of your best, Karilea. Excellent write! Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
It may be old but it is "still" a goodie. A beautiful write. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
If a person was lucky enough to have this written for him, then he would be lucky indeed. This is exquisite in its reach and depth, Karilea. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful! (kiss on cheek) A timeless classic flows from your pen, still as the waters of the lake, still as the dew on a magnolia petal, still as beauty. (sigh) I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunshine, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JoMason Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 57 |
Sunshine, Lucky is love that when old stays new. This gentleman is lucky to have you. Jo Mason |
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