Open Poetry #17 |
Take Me Back to Yesterday |
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Take me back to yesterday When dreams were not yet shattered When moving woes and Christmas lists Were concerns that really mattered. Take me back to yesterday When fear didn't quake my knees When bile didn't rise within my throat Transport me back in time, please! Remind me how it felt to breathe Before the word "cancer" was uttered When terror didn't dominate These thoughts which are so cluttered. Take me back to yesterday And a life not filled with dread Let hope and happiness romp again Within this weary head. Take me back to yesterday Protect me from tomorrow Or give me now a guarantee It won't bring only sorrow. Dedicated to my Daddy, inspired by Marge - 12/6/01 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"Dedicated to my Daddy....Inspired by Marge..." YES!!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SuthernGal~ You know I share the spirit of this one~ Bless you and bless your dad. Prayers are lifted in his name to the One who can heal all~ I love you~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sunshine: Thank you! *S* And Marge... hon, you've earned some major polish on your halo this morning... I can never thank you enough. *S* Yesterday seems a million miles away... now all I can do is pray. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
please add my name to the list of thoughts and prayers being sent out for your dad, you and your family. I'm so very sorry to hear your family is being touched by this. heart-hugs jm |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh yeah Suthern ~ I'd like those guarantees too....This is a great write, thanks for sharing. Bonnie |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Suthern, my prayers are for you and yours. Beautiful express. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Janet Marie & Gentle Spirit: Thank you both so very much... your prayers are appreciated more than I can say. BSC: I don't think they're given, though. *sad smile* I'm glad you liked... thank you. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Belle - You write so well. I sincerely hope your father does well. You are such a loving, caring person. God speed and God bless for your father, and for you, too. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Beautiful writing in such sad times... Hugs to you, my friend... Regards, sudhir |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
oh gosh lady "protect me from tomorrow"...what a way to say it...and you know if I could, I would...beautiful poem, in you, your daddy is a blessed man... |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Suthern...Good luck to you and yours...hope and pray that you get a tomorrow that is better than yesterday.... luv & hugs, amigo |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
LJA, Sudhir, jellybeans & amigo... old friends and new - your responses are so greatly appreciated. I apologize for not getting back to this sooner... my thanks are sincere, no matter how belated. *S* You've all brought truth to the adage that a burden shared is a burden lightened... I thank you for your thoughts and prayers and the comfort your caring brings. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Suthern, may it comfort you to know you are not going to be alone going through this, hold on girl! We've got you. ~*~ The Very Best Of The Season To You And Yours ~*~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Suthern ... what a heartwarming read this was ... such a beautifully flowing verse, with wonderful cadence throughout. Please know that you have my sincere wishes that tomorrow will bring happiness to your life, and thank you for touching mine this morning. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
It's a new world order, isn't it.. Take us back indeed... We're right there with you, Ruth... Prayers for your dad still coming.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, A sad and lovely write. Beautiful rhyme and cadence. My love Sy |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Mysteria, Kit, Nan & Seymour: Your thoughts and prayers and kind comments mean so much to me... and your the hands you offer in friendship do comfort. *S* Thank you all so very much!! |
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