Open Poetry #17 |
My Dreams After All |
ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
My Dreams After All In my dream she is beautiful full of life, she is meaningful And with her presence truly felt her honor, her trust ..., my heart melt She's showered in a glowing light face unknown, shadowed, out of sight Faith, purpose swarm amongst the flames as passions char the nights remains I must know by the break of dawn before the day breaks and she is gone What is your name, who do I call to fulfill my dreams after all Quiet, no sound,silence is heard in movement I heard every word Pain, hurt, confusion and her loss poured from her eyes baring her cross Arms wrapt tightly around the whole thru the binds I could see her soul When sparked by the glimmering flames my mind searched the possible names Only one comes to me that's true it starts with "Y" and ends with "U" This is you, the name I will call to fulfill my dreams after all. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is genuinely beautiful...very very moving...well done and thank you for the read... K |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a wonderful dream. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
written very nicely Craig...*s |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Craig, this is a beautiful dream, and a beautiful poem. Sandra |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* you write love and romance from such a poetic soul. I always melt when reading your work. Well done, Craig. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this....wonderful Craig!! Very romantic! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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