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Snowballing
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Snowballing A slow, seeping (vine-like creeping) realization encroaches, a small voice at first, a whisper that steadily grows louder, it rebuffs silence and tugs at mind strings. A chorus repeating (never retreating) chimes with a past that wants to be present, of paths thought to be closed, crumbs of old trails exposed, a way back to Pacific breezes passageway to genesis. With increasing clarity (and alarming verity), once immovable obstacles slowly blow away, could it be that barrier was me? A cloudless message calls me home. © 2001 Corinne Bailey [This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 12-06-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ Oh my ! This is beautifully done~ You continue to grow in your writing~ This is a keeper~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Corinne - nice to read you again  I agree...this is a keeper...  K |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A cloudless message.... what a thought! Thank you! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Marge - big hugs back to you, lady, and thank you! Severn and Sunshine - thank you kindly! Corinne |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Enjoyed this very much. Very good. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Cor, your snowball keeps getting bigger and bigger as it gathers the momentum. You are good, hon, very, very good...very gentle smile |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* "a cloudless message calls me home" Magnificent. I love it. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful!!!! Charisma |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exquisitely penned Corinne! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne, I agree with Marge on this one. Excellent write. *L* |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Wonderful write, always heed the inner calling. [This message has been edited by insect (edited 12-09-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) BRAVO!!! What a beautiful poem with a soft spiritual message! (sigh) I love it! Your words always amaze me! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet Corrine! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corrine, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Hi sweet poet, a wonderful write. Listen to the ocean while its calling. Park |
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