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Magnus
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0 posted 2001-12-08 01:25 PM


Love me as I am, for I can be only myself.
Let me love you as you are, none other.
Keep your heart open to that which I give.
For I will give you all I possess, all I have.

My vow to you is timeless..
Peace...knowing that I will be there.
Comfort...having my touch, my shield.
Joy...awakening at your side each day.
Respect...treating you as my dearest friend.
Understanding...knowing when you need me.
Listen...letting your words be heard.

I will not promise...promises are broken.
I will try...for I make mistakes....I am human.
I ask only this of you...nothing else...
Kiss me as passionately as I kiss you.
Love me as intensely as I do you.
Let me keep you here, deep within me.

For...my dear...I do love you!



© Copyright 2001 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-12-08 01:35 PM


I hope you are reading these beautiful poems to her!!!  

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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2 posted 2001-12-08 01:38 PM




(sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooooo romantic, sweet friend! (smiles) Your loving heart shines with faithfulness and acceptance, which are the beautiful gifts of true love your golden heart shines with. (sigh) We all make mistakes, but your loving heart is destined to love eternally! (sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this declaration of love is marvelous! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magnus, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Magnus
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3 posted 2001-12-08 01:39 PM


She listens to some of them...I even sang one
to her...that was the day I discovered that
I can sing not too shabbily..Every now and
then I put one in an email to her...Need to
do it more...Hmmmm...maybe I will??......

Thanx Kay.

Magnus
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4 posted 2001-12-08 01:46 PM


Thank you Noah,  Tis not a perfect man,  nor
will I ever be....just trying to be a good one.

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5 posted 2001-12-08 01:52 PM


Oh you are an extraordinary man!!!
Your wife is so very lucky. This is a heartfelt request to your lady love! ((Big Hugs))

RP

Magnus
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6 posted 2001-12-08 01:58 PM


RP...I just sent it to her in an Ecard...
Think she will like it?  Me thinks she will.
Thanx.

Startime
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7 posted 2001-12-08 10:04 PM


*sigh* it is so good to have you back writing your poems of love and romance. I bet the card brought tears of love to her eyes. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Justbleu
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8 posted 2001-12-08 10:49 PM


Magnus this is so endearing and sweet....so much honesty....offering only yourself as you are!!!!!! Wonderful poem!!!

Bridgette  

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9 posted 2001-12-08 10:56 PM




And what a love! Sir...

I wouldn't ask for anything less....

Truly a heartfelt write...
~Sigh~ If only all would love this way..!

Thank you dearly for this ...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


rwood
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10 posted 2001-12-09 09:59 AM


Now this is a true heart. One that gives with all. Every line feels so genuine and beats with real love. You are a gift.

Sincerely,
Regina

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11 posted 2001-12-09 11:22 AM


this is so touching....what a beautiful generous way to say "I love you" this would make a fantastic Hallmark card for sure   and hey!! It's nice to "see" you   great picture  
Charisma
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12 posted 2001-12-09 11:45 AM


Beautiful.....and glad you send this one as e-card, bet she likes it a lot.

((hugs))
Charisma

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13 posted 2001-12-09 05:53 PM


Beautiful poem, can be used in a wedding I love it!
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