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Continue Rain..........a sonnet
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Continue Rain..........a sonnet |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Relent not, peaceful drops of rain Soothe with timeless healing refrain Favor me with your waters pure I am bound by sound, soft allure Fall ‘ere steady, in metered time Proffer sweetly, poetic rhyme Touch in me with each drip of drop Emotions purge forth, dare not stop Surely is my heart’s remedy In tune with soul’s own melody Graced to paper, thoughts in inking Shared with others gently linking Offering up reverent plea continue rain, fall steadily ~SEA~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Your beautiful love in your words always showers with beauty upon these blue pages, sweet Susan! (smiles) Your soul always sings with such sweet, tintinnabulous melody! Love and happiness and emotion shines from your gorgeous verse always, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) More, more! I love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 12-05-2001).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I can use a steady rain of your meter do you have it poured handy by the litre? Seems I have a bit of work to do on my own but I'll take this lovely straight away home... |
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True Reflections Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 143Ohio, USA |
Sea, I really liked this. Sometimes it seems the words do seem to fall like rain and other times you go over a waterfall and don't even get wet. Hopeless romantics must have an outlet. Roger |
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LadySofia Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 238FL., USA |
Hey! I like your style. We need rain desperately down here in the southeast. It's the dry season, but...it wouldn't hurt my water bill any...Great read! ^_^ LadySofia "The smallest feline is a masterpiece." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Sea, This is beautiful! So...this is what you have been up to while I was 'under the weather'  ~Hugs to you, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
We received a few days of heavy rain here recently...heaven sent...James |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Continue, SEA, write steadily 1derful, gal, just 1derful! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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misguided angel Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 106Australia |
Sea, lovely words and thoughts put together so well. Thank you for the enjoyment you have given me this morning. Andrea Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Relent not, peaceful drops of rain Soothe with timeless healing refrain Favor me with your waters pure I am bound by sound, soft allure Fall ‘ere steady, in metered time Proffer sweetly, poetic rhyme Touch in me with each drip of drop Emotions purge forth, dare not stop ===================================== the rain has always been one of your sweetest muses and this lovely piece is proof. Beautiful write of rhyme sea-girlie. jm |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I love sonnets and as sonnets go this one is a masterpiece. BRAVO!!!**Hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ 'Surely is my heart’s remedy In tune with soul’s own melody Graced to paper, thoughts in inking Shared with others gently linking' As fine a piece as I've seen you write~ Just lovely, gal~ Just lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Susan - very nicely done! Sonnets are not that easy, but you make it seem otherwise. |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Sea,beautifully written!   Juanita |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very very very much It's still raining...... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
It started to rain here about an hour ago, it is soothing in it's way. Enjoyed. |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*sigh* Beautifully done, SEA. I love it! Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
SEA, Spoken like a true Oregonian! I've experienced the weather and now can connect it to life too. Thanks. The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present! [This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 12-07-2001).] |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Enjoyed this very much. A rain sonnet. Very good. [This message has been edited by mirror man (edited 12-07-2001).] |
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Dennis Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 235Indiana |
This reads like something from a book. It's very nice, SEA Dennis |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Makes me want a Latte be the shore outside a cafe with the rain just pouring down!!!! Great job! I love it when poetry takes me somewhere...and this one does! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
You and your rain, Susan. LOL! It's raining here right now and I was just on my way out the door to look at sailboats. Grrr@rain.  Nice work, sweetie. (((hugs)))Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue...a beautiful sonnet expressing so well part of nature that we oft times don't like to have around us....Send some our way... we desperately need it... |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Hi SEA! I love the rain, it is so refreshing! However, I don;t like getting caught in the rain when I am wearing a really nice outfit LOL! or have a really nice hair do! hehe |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You paint a very beautiful picture of a rainy day, Sea...I loved the poem and I love rainy days.   copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
will send you some rain Sea, as we have plenty of those days here... it's always a delight to read your poetry my dear friend. ((hugs)) Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow, thank you all so much!! It looks like I might be getting more rain today, possibly snow!! yea for me!  LOL again, thank you all for liking this one. I do love the rain |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
(faints) She said burn ... together. |
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