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Marge Challenge: Be Not A Stranger To Love
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Marge Challenge: Be Not A Stranger To Love |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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in the brand new part of that town, the shark started a New Wave Club; no matter who felt up or down, each came by to meet at the hub. the shark got rich in Paradise, as he became famous and big; like rare scent of Indian spice that many love to smell and pick. his rate of growth had the law bowled - with its hands tied and feeling stunned; by his fame among young and old and the lawful way it was done! after all, what he said; he did! that he would start a new wave club and promote to bring it to speed; he named the raved joint, 'The Love Club' outside, the billboard read, "Welcome! Please Be Not A Stranger To Love" soon the old and the new did come, drawn like moths, to the flame of love. small part of the tale of that shark who knew, one can be rich, from Love, but like an eerie light in dark, he died poor - a stranger to love! °?° thanks, Marge |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ My friend ... you are meant to be 'challenged' ..  Thank you for allowing my muses to play in your inkwell~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Sudhir,I hope love can keep bringing in the young and old.I really enjoyed this! Juanita |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Sooooooo beautiful! (smiles) May we all unite together and spread our love to all the world, for it forever lights the candle of our heart like that indian spice! (sigh) Sooooooo wonderful, you write these challenge sso magnificently! I love it! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Marge, thanks a lot, dear friend... it is an honour to be part of this... Juanita, I hope so too... thanks for coming by and glad that you enjoyed... Noah, you can only imagine how much it pleases me to read your response... thanks a lot... Regards to all, Sudhir |
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