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Skip of Heart
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee 
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If in gentle step to three four time you graced my floor would not the orchestra miss one call for beat as they watched? Even as all eyes might be upon me I would deeply feel a certain skip of heart Immediate, in the rush of private searching As music would no longer Come from strings or wind Plucked or blown by mortal men But from souls entwined With yours…….. Divine At last, to brush one note from lips to cheek captured in momentary hush of rhythm’s primal charm I shall dance into you with secret applause
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Romantically beautiful. This poem is soft and tender and filled with feelings of loves dance. BRAVO!!!  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 12-03-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Regina, you are sooooooo romantic, this love poem is so whimsically gorgeous! (smiles) May your loving heart forever sweep him off his feet and soar together with you in a dance of eternal love! (big hugggssssss) Sooooooo beautiful, I love it, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes, please thank your muse many times over. . . well done. . .  ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
As music would no longer Come from strings or wind Plucked or blown by mortal men But from souls entwined With yours…….. Divine At last, to brush one note from lips to cheek captured in momentary hush of rhythm’s primal charm I shall dance into you with secret applause ============================= OH YEAH....LET ME THANK THAT MUSE  Divine? yes indeed... wowzers I need to be inpired like this again  very cool poem poetess Regina(and muse) *wink* |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
What a muse-ical delight! You've got all the words, Regina, and you use them so well... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
She skips a beat on romantic feet and captures a band of hearts in her hand then smiles, tasting a muse mint |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
So soft and melodic! I just had to stop in and read this, for you are my idol sweet Regina! Love, RosePetal |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Regina, what beautiful sentiment and feeling of adore you have etched here, riding on the wings of silence, where a smile, a touch, the muse of love comes calling to tempt the heart. I enjoyed the read Regina, well done yet again. Sincerely Rick |
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misguided angel Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 106Australia |
I cannot add to what has been said before me, so I will just echo their thoughts. This touched me, it is so beautiful. Andrea Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
At last, to brush one note from lips to cheek captured in momentary hush of rhythm’s primal charm I shall dance into you with secret applause Hey you!! I hope that muse of yours continues to visit you, many times over! Beautiful write! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Regina - not only do I love the words, I love the picture of you - it looks different than the others |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Everything good here, Regina. Very beautiful vision. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Regina, Sounds good to me. Hugs & Kisses. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a beautiful romantic vision you have set. I just love it. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Karen: Hey Stellar One! Hugs!! so glad you enjoyed!!! Noah: You are my sunshine! Love and hugs! Sven: Thank you! And my muse a million times! Big hugs!Janet: LOL! You're such a hoot! I share! Many smiles and *winks back at ya! Balladeer: You wit is precious. I wish I really did have them all...but you have some very special ones all your own! Hugs! Midnitesun: LOVELY!!! Thank you for such a poetic reply. Nothing like being minty fresh! LOL! ~winking and thanking you dearly. RosePetal: You are truly a Rose. No need of me for you to be as sweet and talented as you are. You just are! Your comment is precious to me. Big Hugs and smiles! Rick: Yes and it only takes a second. So glad you visited me. Thank you dear Poet! Hugs! Andrea: You have said beautifully and I appreciate you deeply! Thank you very much! Donna: Me too! And you are such a doll! I'm so glad my ~somy visited me today!!! Hugs! LngJhnAg: You are very kind! Thank you dearly. Big Smile and much appreciation Sandra: Thanks sweet Lady! so glad you came by! Hugs! Seymour: Thrilled you think so! ~Hugs and Kisses right back! Smartchick: I appreciate your viewing of that vision dearly! Hugs to you! Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Regina, I know my eyes are on you! Beautiful write. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is lovely, Regina. Kathleen (Kay) |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Yes, I like this too. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Regina Yet another fine piece of writing you have given us from your wonderful tapestry of words......simply stunning! Take care....Sue Suetang |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Larry: Awww don't be a wallflower jump in! LOL! Thank you for viewing this piece. You are too cute. Hugs! Kay: Sincere Hugs and thanks for stopping by! Mirrorman: So glad you enjoyed this one! Thanks bunches! Sue: I'm always thrilled when you, my lady, come by and connect! Thank you dearly! Hugs! Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Stunning, my friend. No critique necessary. (((hugs))) Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very beautiful and romantic! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
No secret about my applause! You've captured many things dear to my heart: dancing, love, romance, poetry. Wow! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Nature Girl Junior Member
since 2001-10-19
Posts 31 |
You have this ability to take a concept and mold it into something otherwise unseen. Something beautiful and intriguing. ~ At last, to brush one note from lips to cheek captured in momentary hush of rhythm’s primal charm I shall dance into you with secret applause ~ Applause, indeed *sigh* How I love to read your verse! |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Regina, you are just so talented! What would we do without you and your muse? This poem is so romantic! Dancing with a loved one, his arms around you. Isn't that sweet? _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Auguste: You are so great to think so! Thanks millions! Hugs! Sodpossum: So nice to meet you. Thank you! I love your name! Interloper: You're swelling my heart! And I thank you dearly!!! Big Hugs! Naturegirl: My! what a most lovely comment. So very encouraging you are and I sincerely thank you with all I am! Hugs to you! Mon Cherie: Lovely poet! Lovely reply. I am so grateful you believe in me. Hugs! Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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