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Bridal Bliss - Marge's Challenge
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Bridal Bliss - Marge's Challenge |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa 
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Bridal Bliss - Marge's Challenge. Mama get off that train, I've told you ten times or more you're tearing the back of my dress and the taxi's at the door, I know you are nervous dear mama at giving your daughter away, But you can't drag me down by the ankles you're ruining my wedding day, Mama get off that train, you're pulling me back at the waist, the congregation is waiting I really must make haste, Trust me, dear mama I'll show you how wonderful marriage can be, Although I'm only sweet sixteen, and he is eighty-three. Olias. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You GOT me!!! I was hearing some blues rhythms with this and my mind was even adding some "harp" for train whistles but I completely lost it at the end! But then? one never knows...there's a movie called "Harold and Maude" that shines among my favorites (but then...psssst! I'm a little 'odd' yanno--DON'T TELL ANYBODY  ) Thanks for the smile this morning! |
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Joe Lamando Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 124Massachusetts,USA |
I love the humerous twist to this. Well done! Joe lamando |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles with delight) Oh Olias, this is soooooooo funny! (smiles) (sigh) Sooooooo clever and hilarious, I love your wonderful words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Olias, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Olias, Cute, enjoyed the read. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OLIAS~ You've given me a wonderful *giggle* this morning~ Thank you ...  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Serenity, Old, you never, I have a pinup of Maude in a swimsuit(she looks like a road map of Paris lol). Thank you for your kind reply. Joe, I think im the only one twisted here but im not bitter, Thanks for the response its much appreciated. Noah, Your making me blush, your generous words have made my day, thank you so much, take care. Seymour, Thank you sir Im glad you liked. Marge, You were the inspiration for the verse, and I think the bride ( sweet sixteen ), while I am just 83. Thank you kind poet. Regards and Thank you to everyone. Olias. |
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