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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-12-01 08:14 AM



6:00 A.M.

morning star kisses
moon’s solemn good night stealing
off into the west


© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-01 08:22 AM


8:15 am e.s.t.

Sun burns away mist
Moonlight is pale memory
South wind blowing warm


Gloom

[This message has been edited by Professor Gloom (edited 12-01-2001).]

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2 posted 2001-12-01 08:23 AM


Sunshine,
A lovely haiku. *L*

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3 posted 2001-12-01 06:51 PM


It is an oddly peaceful time...when both day and night exist.  I like this alot.
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4 posted 2001-12-01 06:52 PM


*sigh* the time between night and morning is so peaceful. I love it best in the summer but when the skies are clear in the winter it is so beautiful out. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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5 posted 2001-12-01 06:55 PM


What's a 6 am?  
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6 posted 2001-12-01 07:20 PM


         .....Peaceful.....enjoyed, Nancy.

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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7 posted 2001-12-01 07:37 PM




(sigh) Such a beautiful sight of sunrise upon the horizon! (smiles) Your words are always so dazzling to read, you are my sunshine, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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8 posted 2001-12-01 08:52 PM


I am definitely not a morning person, I'm a night owl, hehe. (hugs)

RP

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9 posted 2001-12-01 09:17 PM


Very nice, but I'm also a night person.
  Lauren

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10 posted 2001-12-01 09:27 PM


Sunshine - well good morning to you, and a lovely write...

BC

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11 posted 2001-12-01 09:51 PM


hehe. I'm not a morning person either.

~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all.
~Blessed are those who find ordinary things extraordinary.

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12 posted 2001-12-02 02:50 AM


Unfortunately I'm working the day shift for awhile and I am seeing lots of 6:00am's I wish I wasn't seeing...even 5:00am's....James
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13 posted 2001-12-02 07:29 AM



You folks are really something else...

circling orb's light
white pathways to walk at night
moonlight poetry

thank you all!

Nan
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14 posted 2001-12-02 10:29 AM


My very most favorite time of day...

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15 posted 2001-12-02 01:39 PM


6AM and it's the quiet hour,
not a creature is stirring
within this old house,
when up on the rooftops
I saw a big moon....
HAHA  
it's still dark at 9:30 AM in winter
so I just say it's 6AM and grin
drinking my coffee with AM poetry.

Yikes, this is ten times longer than your poem. Can I do that?

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16 posted 2001-12-03 12:38 PM


cant write a response
In Haiku format dammit
oops I think I did,

Enjoyed Sunshine
Regards,
Olias.

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17 posted 2001-12-04 07:59 AM


Cat meows at moon
Shoe flies like a shooting star
Venus rests in peace

How was that Karilea?  I love your poem more, though.

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18 posted 2001-12-04 10:39 AM


Venus rests in peace
but cat now most unhappy
still dawn quickly comes
Nice Haiku my friend.... a pleasure

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19 posted 2001-12-05 02:25 PM


Isn't that just what it is like?  Very pretty, Karilea.  

Michael

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20 posted 2001-12-05 02:37 PM


Very peaceful image.Loved it!
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Deep in the heart
21 posted 2001-12-05 02:38 PM


butterfly kisses
Sunshine warms awakening
moon's duty is done

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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