Open Poetry #17 |
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6:00 a.m. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
6:00 A.M. morning star kisses moon’s solemn good night stealing off into the west |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
8:15 am e.s.t. Sun burns away mist Moonlight is pale memory South wind blowing warm Gloom [This message has been edited by Professor Gloom (edited 12-01-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, A lovely haiku. *L* |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
It is an oddly peaceful time...when both day and night exist. I like this alot. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* the time between night and morning is so peaceful. I love it best in the summer but when the skies are clear in the winter it is so beautiful out. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
What's a 6 am? ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
.....Peaceful.....enjoyed, Nancy. "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) Such a beautiful sight of sunrise upon the horizon! (smiles) Your words are always so dazzling to read, you are my sunshine, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I am definitely not a morning person, I'm a night owl, hehe. (hugs) RP |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Very nice, but I'm also a night person. Lauren |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunshine - well good morning to you, and a lovely write... BC |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
hehe. I'm not a morning person either. ~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Unfortunately I'm working the day shift for awhile and I am seeing lots of 6:00am's I wish I wasn't seeing...even 5:00am's....James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You folks are really something else... circling orb's light white pathways to walk at night moonlight poetry thank you all! |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
My very most favorite time of day... ![]() |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
6AM and it's the quiet hour, not a creature is stirring within this old house, when up on the rooftops I saw a big moon.... HAHA ![]() it's still dark at 9:30 AM in winter so I just say it's 6AM and grin drinking my coffee with AM poetry. Yikes, this is ten times longer than your poem. Can I do that? |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
cant write a response In Haiku format dammit oops I think I did, Enjoyed Sunshine Regards, Olias. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Cat meows at moon Shoe flies like a shooting star Venus rests in peace How was that Karilea? I love your poem more, though. |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Venus rests in peace but cat now most unhappy still dawn quickly comes Nice Haiku my friend.... a pleasure |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Isn't that just what it is like? Very pretty, Karilea. ![]() Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very peaceful image.Loved it! |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
butterfly kisses Sunshine warms awakening moon's duty is done Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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