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Cuddlez
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0 posted 2001-12-04 09:57 PM



I used to see the sunlight
Dancing off the waves
Playing like a dolphin
Twisting endlessly

I thought I saw the sunlight
Play hide and go with the clouds
"Gotcha." Ooops now gone again
Forever twinkling bright

I swore one day it shone so bright
People played coverup
Illuminating hidden truths
Revealing flaws and long lost loves

I felt the sunlight on my face
One long, cold winter day

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1 posted 2001-12-04 10:10 PM




(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful and cheerful this sweet vision is! (sigh) Love fills your upbeat words with the magic of your warm soft heart! (sigh) Sunshine always fills your smiles, sweet Cuddlez, I love it!!! (smiles) I love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cuddlez, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-05 01:45 PM



Cuddlez, it's been awhile since I've seen you around here...about time you came home, to share your poetic penning...and this?

I like!

sodpossom
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3 posted 2001-12-05 01:54 PM


Very beautiful imagery!
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