Open Poetry #17 |
I used to see the sunlight |
Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
I used to see the sunlight Dancing off the waves Playing like a dolphin Twisting endlessly I thought I saw the sunlight Play hide and go with the clouds "Gotcha." Ooops now gone again Forever twinkling bright I swore one day it shone so bright People played coverup Illuminating hidden truths Revealing flaws and long lost loves I felt the sunlight on my face One long, cold winter day |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful and cheerful this sweet vision is! (sigh) Love fills your upbeat words with the magic of your warm soft heart! (sigh) Sunshine always fills your smiles, sweet Cuddlez, I love it!!! (smiles) I love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cuddlez, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Cuddlez, it's been awhile since I've seen you around here...about time you came home, to share your poetic penning...and this? I like! |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very beautiful imagery! |
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