Open Poetry #17 |
Out of My Hands |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Out of My Hands I could write you a love poem but it wouldn’t make you mine sing you the perfect song it would be wasting my time even if I prayed it to be couldn’t make your heart feel give up all that I am saying words can not make it real no there is nothing I can do the only possible truth is out of my hands I have seen the proof "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Very Nice 1_Lady And very true, Emotions solitary, Not useless but far less than rewarding. Enjoyed the read. Gloom |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is true, all the writing in the world won't make someone love you... Kathleen (Kay) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I liked this much Helen...hope you are well and happy! |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Yes, sometimes it is out of our hands... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Slick, Well done and what you say is true. *L* |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
This is so true you can`t make someone love you. Juanita |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Your words ring true. Peaches |
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