untitled... something written a long time back...

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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

0 posted 2001-12-03 11:20 AM

The wise men said ...
A red rose
never fails
If given
with a touch of feel

To woo a gentle lady
And to bless the love
that you have
Deep in your heart

The wise men said...
Singing songs
always help
If you sing them
with a loving sense

To gain her approval
And to bless the love
that you have
Deep in your heart

The wise men said...
Speaking your heart
always helps
If spoken
with true emote

To find her agreement
And to bless the love
that you have
Deep in your heart

And so we sing
...these love songs
And so we dance
...the rain dance
And so we speak
...the love talk

And so we love
...and love to love
And thus we give
...and give and give

***!***
this was written, actually scribbled on a piece of newspaper... and I found that clipping in one of my diaries (marked 1997)... so this must be 4-5 years old... wanted to share this... then I used to scribble at the rapid pace of one in a month or so...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-12-03 11:39 AM

It only serves to show how very far you have come as a poet my friend

Write on, please.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2001-12-03 12:18 PM

Newspaper scribblings trapped in a diary, waiting to be released for 5 years.
That image is interesting.
Your wise men spoke well, but the wisest one is the one who listened and then followed the direction of his open heart.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2001-12-03 12:26 PM

Sudhir,
It is still very nice. Enjoyed

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2001-12-03 04:02 PM

Sudhir - even though it was written a long time back, I'm glad you brought it into the present so that I could read it...

BC

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-12-03 05:20 PM

Well, it's beautiful, I wish I could tell you how much this comforted me.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2001-12-03 05:41 PM

(smiles) And this beautiful lovely poem shows that you have had such gorgeous talent from the start in your magnificent words! (big hugggsssssss) Loves beauty fills every word of this sweet ballad, I love it!!! (sigh) Beautiful, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

7 posted 2001-12-04 02:41 AM

Thank you all, O dear friends...

I am touched that this one was seen by your kind eyes, read and responded to ...

Regards,
Sudhir

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2001-12-04 04:23 PM

I've missed your words, Sudhir... This is a special treat to find waiting when I finally get some time online... great job!

Logan
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since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

9 posted 2001-12-04 04:32 PM

Sudhir, it seems to me, that you are the wise man. Keep scribbling and finding, for these are jewels...gentle smile

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2001-12-04 05:05 PM

Reminds me of all the times I have scribbled on newspapers, paper bags, napkins and whatever...sometimes it is hard to figure out what I wrote later when I look...sometimes I misplace or lose them...
Reminds me of the time a woman I just met wrote her phone number on a napkin for me and I later when I got home and was going to call her I suddenly realized I had cleaned out my pockets when I went in to the mens room and apparantly threw her phone number away...James

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2001-12-04 07:03 PM

Sudhir~
I've just shared this with a special person in my life~
He nods in agreement that you have penned reflection of his love~

'A red rose
never fails
If given
with a touch of feel

To woo a gentle lady
And to bless the love
that you have
Deep in your heart'

Delicately stunning, my friend~
Thank you for sharing the gentle of you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

12 posted 2001-12-05 06:20 AM

Thank You... THANK you... thank YOU....

regards to all,
sudhir

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