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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-12-05 01:13 AM


Chocolate Pudding

She has that absolute right
to desire or reject me.
To toss me out in a flash
or to probe and inspect me.
Shall she take in a stranger
or reside on her own.
Will it be jello and chocolate pudding
or baked potatoes and fillet mignon?
Such choices are based on
a lifetime she's living.
The state of her heart
and acceptance and forgiving.
No one knows which way
her heart will go.
Yet a kiss and a hug
will tell her heart
all it needs to know.
Lord give me the grace
of her soft silky touch
for I long to love
her so terribly much.
To never again feel
lonely or out of place.
Together forever
within love's
sweet embrace.

JamesLee
December05
2001


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Kethry
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1 posted 2001-12-05 02:21 AM


James,
nice perspective on life, choice and love.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



RosePetal
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2 posted 2001-12-05 11:24 AM


Your right, you'll never know which way someone's heart is going to go, all you can do is show them the love that you behold for them. Oh, and for me, It would be butterscotch pudding, hehe

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Sudhir Iyer
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3 posted 2001-12-05 11:31 AM


nicely said and wonderfully written...

regards, my friend,
sudhir

N orth Carolina Girl
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4 posted 2001-12-05 02:34 PM


James,I love the way you did the comparisons on this.I myself am a chocolate pudding and baked potato girl.

Juanita

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Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2001-12-05 02:48 PM




Mmmmmmmmm...I prefer butterscotch pudding, that's my favorite of all! (smiles) It can be such an anxious time when you discover if someone will love you in return or not, but I know deep down with all my heart He prepares each one of us to our true love and together, we will all find sweetness and eternal joy in one another! (sigh) Soooooo beautiful, you are sooooooo romantic sweet friend! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2001-12-05 05:44 PM


Thank you Kethry, Rose Petal, Sudhir, Juanita and Noah for the nice responses...
I love chocolate pudding...James

Midnitesun
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7 posted 2001-12-05 06:23 PM


There is no icon smilie of a chocolate pudding hug, so this will have to make do.


  

Startime
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8 posted 2001-12-05 06:30 PM


mmmmmmmm I love chocolate but it has to be milk chocolate. *giggling* love just happens...I guess we have to decide whether we will let it happen to us. I hope you get what you desire, James. You have a heart of gold which is a priceless treasure. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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