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texasrose
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0 posted 2001-12-05 06:07 AM


You know who you are
you know I love you so
I wait to read your words
and I hate when you must go.

Each morning again then brings
your smile back to me
you put a light into my life
and allow me to be me.

For this I think your great
and your really rather rare
you shine above the rest
there is nothing to compare.

In my eyes you'll always be
no matter how near or far
the apple of my eye
a bright and shining star.

[This message has been edited by texasrose (edited 12-05-2001).]

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2001-12-05 07:29 AM


Wow...a shining star from a smitten texas rose! Someone should be pleased this morning!  
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2 posted 2001-12-05 01:34 PM




(smiles) And you are a beautiful rose to us all, always singing and glistening with love! (sigh) Your friend will love this so very much, this is sooooooo pretty! I love it!!! (big hugggsssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet rose, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-12-05 01:39 PM


Everyone knows who they are except me  
I'm teasing. I like this, texasrose  

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
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4 posted 2001-12-05 04:10 PM


A gorgeous poem from a sweet rose! May that shining star always stay as bright for you!

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5 posted 2001-12-05 04:31 PM


We all need a shining star...James
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6 posted 2001-12-05 05:38 PM


The title attracted me right off the bat and being a star myself it was nice to know that another star is shining so brightly in someone's life. Wonderful writing. I am sure the person this is meant for will love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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7 posted 2001-12-05 06:09 PM


This really is a very nice poem tribute. Keep that shining star in view.
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