Open Poetry #17 |
Do Poets Truly Sleep? (Whispers of Dawn challenge..thanks again, Marge) |
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
(some of us) (don't stop) (writing in slumber) (words fill upside down skies) (while imaginations breathe on) (pondering wisdoms) (after unkempt sleep has tied us once again) *sigh This is the best I can do, folks! Colors and fonts. I've moved it so many ways around the page that I'm dizzy. lol Maybe next time will be better. enjoy! Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since [This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 12-04-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wouldn't miss it. . . I can't wait to see what you do with it. . . (btw, I like the words. . . but, I hope that you'll work with the form. . . ) -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
bare with you? uh.....ok. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
um. . . I don't think that you'll want to bare with anyone just yet. . . LOL. . . so, we'll bear with you. . . LOL. . . (and. . . pssst. . . not a smaller font. . . but, this is on the right track. . . ) ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! Poets never sleep, for in our dreams and in our imaginations, we're always painting such beautiful art, just like your lovely heart always does! (sigh) You always write so lovingly and gorgeous, sweet friend! I love you so much, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jennifer, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
okay..I can't get the darned font in there anyways! WHERE IS MY BANGING HEAD ICON????? Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Oddly enough, I write my best stuff late at night, im talking like 1 or 2am. I love to write when all is silent and peaceful. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
um. . . hello??? you had it right the second time. . . sheesh. . . LOL. . . try making the stuff in the parentheses this way. . . . . . and, set it off a little. . . it's almost another poem in itself. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
LOL! thanks so far everyone! JOHN! HELLO!! LOL! ME NO SPEAK ITALICS?? LOL! WHAT IS THE DARNED CODE FOR IT? and the second time just looked too simple. I didn't like it. There has to be SOMETHING else I can do with it. and I know its a second poem altogether. ThatsawhyI'mtryingtoseperateem! Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since [This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 12-04-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I like it this way. . . don't change it anymore!!! ok???? ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
LOL! Do you speak for the masses who will get a headache reading this? Its UGLY right now! Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
ummkay..lol...I came, I edited, I used my crayon! I wonder what it happens now. Good thing these posts don't bump..otherwise I couldn't talk myself and everyone else so constantly like this. Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TemptyOne~ You have done REAL GOOD~ Be proud of all you learned ... and my stock in Tylenol just rose a point or two~ Wonderfully formatted and creatively done~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
You did a wonderful job just the way it is. I love it. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, for this, I receive three poems...one in red, one in green, then a duet....and each one is as lovely as the other.... Thank You! Colors and Fonts are a bugger, aren't they? |
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