Open Poetry #17 |
Counting The Ways You Love Me |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I'm counting the ways you love me As I'm making this daisy chain I'm remembering the way my heart skips a beat Whenever you call out my name I'm counting the amount of steps it takes To reach the door of your loving heart There is no amount of distance That could keep our two hearts apart Your love draws me in so easily Like a moth towards a flame Whenever I'm in your presence I feel we are one and the same You fill up all of my senses A love such as this I've never felt How easily I give myself to you As into your loving arms I melt My days are so much brighter Whenever they're spent with you My clouds have a silvery lining Your love makes me feel brand new I'll count my lucky stars On this spectacular starry night As you wrap your arms around me And hold me oh so tight No matter where life takes me Whether I'm near or far Your love remains a part of me Deep inside is where you are Suetang |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is very sweet, Sue...thank you for sharing this one!! |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
awwww sweet sue! I am counting ways I love your poetry...your words always stand out so beautifully on these blue pages! (hugs) RP |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Sunshine Thank you so much for your kind words. RosePetal How very kind you are, your words humble me. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful! (sigh) Your warm loving heart is always like a lantern, luring such sweet visions of love in! (sigh) Love is always in your sweet heart, and we all love you so very much, sweet Sue! (sigh) Sooooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
Suetang... charming, sweet and lovely... Bec "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you." |
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LadySofia Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 238FL., USA |
I liked the rhythm of this one, but most of all the topic. Marvelous! ^_^ LadySofia "The smallest feline is a masterpiece." |
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