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Suetang
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0 posted 2001-12-04 09:22 PM


I'm counting the ways you love me
As I'm making this daisy chain
I'm remembering the way my heart skips a beat
Whenever you call out my name

I'm counting the amount of steps it takes
To reach the door of your loving heart
There is no amount of distance
That could keep our two hearts apart

Your love draws me in so easily
Like a moth towards a flame
Whenever I'm in your presence
I feel we are one and the same

You fill up all of my senses
A love such as this I've never felt
How easily I give myself to you
As into your loving arms I melt

My days are so much brighter
Whenever they're spent with you
My clouds have a silvery lining
Your love makes me feel brand new

I'll count my lucky stars
On this spectacular starry night
As you wrap your arms around me
And hold me oh so tight

No matter where life takes me
Whether I'm near or far
Your love remains a part of me
Deep inside is where you are

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-12-04 09:34 PM



This is very sweet, Sue...thank you for sharing this one!!

RosePetal
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2 posted 2001-12-04 09:48 PM


awwww sweet sue! I am counting ways I love your poetry...your words always stand out so beautifully on these blue pages!
(hugs)

RP

Suetang
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3 posted 2001-12-04 09:52 PM


Sunshine
Thank you so much for your kind words.

RosePetal
How very kind you are, your words humble me.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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4 posted 2001-12-04 09:56 PM




(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful! (sigh) Your warm loving heart is always like a lantern, luring such sweet visions of love in! (sigh) Love is always in your sweet heart, and we all love you so very much, sweet Sue! (sigh) Sooooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Bec
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5 posted 2001-12-04 09:59 PM


Suetang...

charming, sweet and lovely...



Bec  

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-Winnie-the-Pooh

LadySofia
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6 posted 2001-12-04 10:13 PM


I liked the rhythm of this one, but most of all the topic. Marvelous!

^_^ LadySofia

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Leonardo Da Vinci

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