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Different Shades of Green
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Different Shades of Green |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania 
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Thanks for the inspiration Marge. I saw the sight In black and white My face was blue Because of you Your hand was red After lies were said The grass isn’t so green If you know what I mean It wasn’t out of the blue It was so typically you The town was painted red While I was home in bed Now I’m tickled pink And what do you think? All I see is a yellow streak, And now I’m not so meek. Here is your pink slip Time for you to get a grip And now as our colors show My colors you finally know How many shades of green? More than you’ve ever seen. ~Susie ~*~Born to Blossom and Bloom to Perish~*~ |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
uh oh.. i think i did mine wrong.. cuz your is so much better... and your so pretty too... MAN!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Very well done Angel! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent Angel! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Susan, this is soooooooo beautiful, I love it!!! (smiles) Isn't Marge just a beautiful inspiring poetess? (smiles) This is sooooooo beautiful, I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Well DONE Angel!! Bravo!!  You really showed us your true colours!!  |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Wonderfully written and so very much enjoyed. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Angel~ My little 'mentee' ... you've grown so in your poetry~ Just lovely honey~ Thank you so much for sharing your 'shade of inspire'. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
very nicely done Angel, i loved your rhymes, i think it make some poems that much more interesting to read. Keep up the good work. Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Angel, you've just coloured my world in brilliant hue what did you do? it made me unblue thanks to you. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very good, Angel. |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
EagleScorpion, I read yours it was very good. Thank you though, your response was very sweet. MidniteSun, Thank you. Enchantress, Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. Noah Eaton, That she is, and I was lucky enough to have her as a mentor with our program. Thanks. Mon Cherie, Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed. Suetang, Glad you liked it. Mentor Marge, Thank you so much for the inspiration. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Hypnosis, It's interesting you should mention the rhyme, because I really don't write rhyming poems. I don't think I'm good enough at them yet, but it just felt right for this one. Thanks. Kethry, I'm so glad my poem made you unblue. Thanks for reading. SmartChick, Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed. ~Susie ~*~Born to Blossom and Bloom to Perish~*~ |
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