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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Rhythms This is the moment to ponder the grace of the moons that have veiled and enfolded their face in the blackness of shadows to a slither of light, Then once again opened their radiance to night This is the time to reflect on the tides that flow outward to sea when the waning moon hides. In the hour of her glory, the waters rush full to capture her image on God’s rippled pool This is the season to notice the worth of each rhythm and pulse of the moon and the earth. It is time to relinquish the power of strife, for a new day has dawned in the course of a life The flow of the waters are seasons we live. When sorrow is waning and joys come to give the gift of a radiant moon in its place, it is time to reveal the allure of your face Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 12-03-2001).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
~This is the seasom to notice the worth of each rhythm and pulse of the moon and the earth. It is time to relinquish the power of strife, for a new day has dawned in the course of a life~ Thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts....excellent piece! ((hugs)) Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
The flow of the waters are seasons we live ~ Too beautiful... regards, Liz, Sudhir |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
A beautiful poem, Liz. You write so exquisitely. I will bless you this once and NOT reveal my face - lol. [This message has been edited by LngJhnAg (edited 12-03-2001).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Liz, this is perfect. It is the season for good poetry any where YOU are... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful Rhythms, Elizabeth! As always! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow! You do this very good. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What can I say but... I didn't want it to end. *S* This is wonderful, a delight for both eyes and ears! |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Liz, very nicely done indeed. A lovely read, thank you..very gentle smile |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The allure is revealed in your wonderful words, dear lady... I have only this to say to you...        |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the flow of the spheres of time must flow through your mind dear Lady. . . because that's what I get from this. . . thank you. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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