Open Poetry #17 |
As Sunlight Falls on All Lost Love - Marge's Challenge |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
As Sunlight Falls on All Lost Love The shell you wore has passed to earth Though spell of you rests unbroken In midnight dream I see my worth In your words still yet unspoken As sunlight falls around my mind Dark brings one forth to live again Stillness comes seeking loves’ entwine, As once was, is now as was then Should we harbor loves endurance Ours in darkness as sunlight falls, Necromancy gives us chance To see beyond forbidden walls ‘Tis a challenge one gladly takes as sunlight falls on our awake |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, ‘Tis a challenge one gladly takes as sunlight falls on our awake Beautiful. *L* |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
'Tis is such a beautiful one... regards to you, Sudhir |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
What a great slant on things - I had to read it twice to delve the necromancy aspect - but each read was well worth it. Now, please make my day and tell me this poem was about a deceased kitty... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"The shell you wore has passed to earth Though spell of you rests unbroken In midnight dream I see my worth In your words still yet unspoken" this is beautiful!! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is very good< Sunshine. I love to read your poems. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetKarilea~ Just how lovely I find this to be .... '‘Tis a challenge one gladly takes as sunlight falls on our awake' You are such an inspirational poetess~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Sis, you do outdo yourself at times..hmm, well, most of the times. Very lovely...very gentle smile |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling sister of my heart, goodness this had tears falling, what is it with you all. Keth makes me cry because she likes to see me red eyed, she say's it gives her a chance (Hah some hope,) 'Deer, make me sob as easily as blinking, of course he also makes me laugh very easily too, so I forgive him. And now you darling girl, just what have I done to be picked upon like this? Mmmmmmmm why make me cry?? It's a beautiful poem sister dearest, absolutely excellent. Now all I have to do is send you one that will have you weeping hysterically. (Will laughter do just as well?) I'm better at laughter, that's what Puck is known for. Impish mischief. Mmmmmm I could have sprinkled this with colors but for the real magic you'll just have to wait 8 days. And counting. I mean it, I'll expect lots of ohhhhhhhh and ahhhhhhhhhhh's at the very least. (smile impishly) love and warm stuff as always Puck To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
And just about every morning Sunshine falls on our awake here at Passions. A happening for which we will be eternally grateful. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I, too, especially like the opening stanza!!! Very fine!!! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
This is beautiful my friend, though I have to say the most outstanding line (to me anyway) was the title "As Sunlight Falls on All Lost Love". Surperb. jwesley |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The shell you wore has passed to earth Though spell of you rests unbroken In midnight dream I see my worth In your words still yet unspoken As sunlight falls around my mind Dark brings one forth to live again Stillness comes seeking loves’ entwine, As once was, is now as was then ======================================== *BIG OLE FRIGGEN SIGH* my goodness this is lovely K.. and you KNOW the parts of my heart this falls softly upon.... equisite phrasing wrapped up in delicate rhymes... keeping this one for me |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* even when expressing such heartfelt feelings you still shed sunlight on us all. This is simply beautiful. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Extemely beautiful. Thre is always hope and it is always worth the risk, I think. Love this. Sandra |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah, but you knew ~ for this is an A+ and I am emailing this to Elizabeth for her pleasure as well. My, but you can make me smile on even a dreary day. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 12-04-2001).] |
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