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How Many Shades of Green
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How Many Shades of Green |
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misguided angel Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 106Australia |
How Many Shades of Green - for Marge's challenge How many nervous phone calls do I have to coach you through? Then listen to the details of everything she said to you. How many lovely ladies paraded for approval only to find out that she's adept at heart removal? How many 'fatal' heart breaks do I have to nurse you through till you get it in your head it's not going to kill you? And how many shades of green do you want me to become before you realise the fact, for you, I am the only one? Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is so well written... so effortless to read ... in other words... enjoyed it... Regards, sudhir |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
Andrea... I know what you mean!! I've been through this once myself. They treat you like their sister or best mate, and it takes absolutely FOREVER for them to finally realise that they do actually like you!!  Wonderful write. Bec "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you." |
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misguided angel Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 106Australia |
Sudhir, thank you, I appreciate your comments. Bec, yeah but is it too late by the time they realise??? Thanks for reading. Andrea Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very, very good. I like this. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MisguidedAngel~ What a wonderful slant of inspire~ I am loving these pieces ... VERY nicely done, poetess~ Thank you for your poetic participation~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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misguided angel Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 106Australia |
SmartChick, thanks glad you enjoyed this. Marge, I read others and tried to go a different way with my poems. I am working on more and hope you enjoy them as well. Thank you Andrea Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so. |
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