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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2001-11-19 10:23 PM


Take me gently
Into your arms  
Make me yours
Eternally

Touch my heart
Often with love

Creating excitement
Under the stars
Dreams of pleasure
Deep inside me
Love me forever
Eternally

© By Sue 11-19-01


© Copyright 2001 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2001-11-20 08:22 AM


Such a nice warm and cuddly acrostic...
Dennis
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2 posted 2001-11-20 08:34 PM


boy oh boy this is nice..reads like a love letter. right off the page

Dennis

Lone Wolf
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3 posted 2001-11-20 08:36 PM


Lovely write!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2001-11-20 08:47 PM


SmartChick~
Very cleverly done acrostic~

'Touch my heart
Often with love'


Ohhhhhh, how much I like that thought~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

Tracey
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5 posted 2001-11-20 09:26 PM


This gives me the warm and fuzzies. I just want to get wrapped in someones arms after reading this.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Startime
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6 posted 2001-11-20 09:31 PM


oh gosh I love the way you put this together. Magnificent.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

catalinamoon
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7 posted 2001-11-20 09:35 PM


Very good, I find these hard to do,you shine at them.
Sandra

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
8 posted 2001-11-20 10:40 PM


Thank you all for the nice replies.
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
9 posted 2001-12-04 10:38 AM



I do think this needs to pop back up to the top...




JamesMichael
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10 posted 2001-12-04 01:28 PM


Yes it is always time to cuddle...James
Startime
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11 posted 2001-12-04 01:31 PM


*sigh* I absolutely love cuddle time. Magnificent.So I had to tell you again.   **Hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (edited 12-04-2001).]

Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2001-12-04 04:10 PM


SmartChick~
I'm back in on this one~
LOVE IT ... and I've been practicing diligently~
Just ask my 'coach'~

Thanks for the return of a *smile*~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

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