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A Longing
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A Longing |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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Take me gently Into your arms Make me yours Eternally Touch my heart Often with love Creating excitement Under the stars Dreams of pleasure Deep inside me Love me forever Eternally © By Sue 11-19-01 |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Such a nice warm and cuddly acrostic...  |
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Dennis Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 235Indiana |
boy oh boy this is nice..reads like a love letter. right off the page Dennis |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lovely write!  All writing comes |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SmartChick~ Very cleverly done acrostic~ 'Touch my heart Often with love' Ohhhhhh, how much I like that thought~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This gives me the warm and fuzzies. I just want to get wrapped in someones arms after reading this. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
 oh gosh I love the way you put this together. Magnificent. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very good, I find these hard to do,you shine at them. Sandra |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Thank you all for the nice replies. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I do think this needs to pop back up to the top...  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes it is always time to cuddle...James |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I absolutely love cuddle time. Magnificent.So I had to tell you again. **Hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 12-04-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SmartChick~ I'm back in on this one~ LOVE IT ... and I've been practicing diligently~ Just ask my 'coach'~  Thanks for the return of a *smile*~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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