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Open Poetry #17

Two Little Bitties

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

0 posted 2001-12-04 01:28 AM

No more shady spots
For me to hide
My thoughts away
Tucked where no one
Would ever know

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Eyelids fade
Slumber proceeds
Visions of wonder
Breathe me away
Twirl me keep me
Whisper softly

Bec
Member

since 2001-02-23

Posts 475
Canberra

1 posted 2001-12-04 01:32 AM

Justbleu... Just like a lullaby for a baby. Simple, but beautiful.

Bec

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
-Winnie-the-Pooh

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

2 posted 2001-12-04 01:34 AM

The first...exposing. The second...comforting. Enjoyed them both.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-12-04 02:10 AM

JustBleu~
SO GOOD to see you~
Hope all is well in your little corner of this big ole world~

Delightfully delicate read~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

4 posted 2001-12-05 12:43 PM

Justbleu,
Nice. I enjoyed.

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