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gokorn1
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since 2001-12-04
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0 posted 2001-12-04 12:18 PM



Why is it always you want something you can never have?
I am confused, fighting myself
Can’t you see it in me?
I try pull you closer, You push me away
What have I done?
Why is it that your taken?
You’re the only thing I want in this world
Is it fear?
Do you see outside your fears?
It seems you tell lies and despise
Every second you’re around me
I wonder if this feeling will ever go away
Each day is more frightening with the anticipation of your call
But IM always let down
Should I take all the stupid [edit by moderator] and run away?
You never gave me a chance
What’s wrong with me?
I could have been your everything
I could have been the one
Is it something I said or did?
Sometimes I ask myself
Why try?
Then I think of you and
Know why I try


I can remember when we first met
we could of really had good some times
when the success started to kick in
life turned into a mess.
Many nights, painful thoughts occured
Is this a game?
You took no pride in me
If you asked if I needed you…
If you asked if I loved you
The answer is forever
I could have been your everything
What do I do now?
All I see, a hate deep inside
Startles me, someone save me
My throat I take grasp
Eyes roll back
Love racing trough my veins
It’s not worth it
[edit by moderator] you
I hate you
I really [edit by moderator] hate you
OH my god I need you
Ahhhh I love you.

How can I cry over someone I never loved?
Never loved...

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 12-04-2001).]

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2001-12-04 12:53 PM


Good question, WHY? Ask that Q every time you think about crying over someone who isn't there for you. But of course, this poem may be all fantasy, poetry, not real life angst.
Welcome to Passions.  You will find many interesting topics on these blue pages. The current "Challenge" started by Marge. It is a very interesting active thread, with lots of variety. Join in on the fun, Good luck!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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2 posted 2001-12-04 12:58 PM


I want what I can't have because it is the challenge that I really want...I don't know what to do when I get it...James
crazy4u
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since 2001-10-28
Posts 67

3 posted 2001-12-04 01:19 AM


Guilty of that too James
this a good poem but if we have to ask why so many times maybe its just us being capricious... who knows??
xoxo

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
4 posted 2001-12-04 01:46 AM


Good question!!!  Welcome to Passions!!!!
I hope you like it here....there's a lot of great poetry....by a lot of fun people.  Hope to see more poetry from you.

Take Care,
Bridgette  

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